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for The Seaside Retreat

by AeroCherry

person amd2175
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO at Severus at the end, dear lord he faints more than those fainting goats! I swear though when i see them I just want to make a big noise to make them faint. It's funny as hell!
person amd2175
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! I've done that before, makes most people stop and go "what?" great way to end an argument...unless your my friend Zach and then he would yell back "great you two sarcastic bastards should get along very well! There is a reason I call you Satan!" This should make you laugh as well, I changed my screen saver on my phone to a HP gif...I love Jason Isaacs, he is one of my favorite actors ever so when I found it I had to put it on there. Basically its two pictures one of Dumbledore, Harry and him standing at his desk and it says "Dumbledore! Harry stole my pimp stick!" then it goes to a picture of just him looking pissed saying "give it back!" I die laughing every time. The other one i have goes "He has more fangirls than me!" (ron) then it goes to a picture of Harry and he goes "who me?" and a green screen comes on and goes "no harry" then it shows Snape and he goes "I do".
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think that Hermione and Severus did a very nice thing by brewing the potion for the little boy. I hope that it works for him. I look forward to reading the next chapter soon.
person amd2175
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Tell him i said to stop being a douche bag! Don't make me get Severus, who is currently resting in my bed after days and nights of fun, to hex his ass!

Hope that got you to smile!
~Ash
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful chapter. I loved the way the guests got a little tipsy during the reception. I thought that was hilarious, especially Remus and Molly. I am glad that Severus and Hermione now own the cottage in Maine. I look forward to reading the next chapter soon.
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter. I am so excited for the wedding and to see what happens next. Thanks for the comment about the name. I thought it would be unique.

schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Delfin
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow :O with ginny lol

uhmm its a great story! loved Severus spanking
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see the next chapters! It should be rather exciting with the wedding and the babies and everything. I love to read this story.