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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So what did Lillyth say to Jethkai? Thats just mean keeping a good threat from us.
Great Update.
What do you mean by liquid tongue, im confused, never heard that description before?
Great Update.
What do you mean by liquid tongue, im confused, never heard that description before?
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update, i love the story so far. and i love your character lillyth.
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Quite an interesting 'little' story. Hope it becomes a 'big' story.
Well written in general, but you have some problems with extra words left in your sentences.
Also, in the first story chapter you used 'watched on' several times. I believe 'watched' or 'looked on' would be more appropriate.
Looking forward to more updates.
Well written in general, but you have some problems with extra words left in your sentences.
Also, in the first story chapter you used 'watched on' several times. I believe 'watched' or 'looked on' would be more appropriate.
Looking forward to more updates.
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
anytime man. although, you wont see any stories from me. i cant write anything worthwhile unless someoe else is writing what i say. still, great stoy
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great!
Don't stop writing it,please.
Don't stop writing it,please.