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July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome. Love it. I'll give you a more detailed opinion when i'm done reading.
PS: it took me 8 chapters to realise that TBC stands for To Be Continued and not for tuberculosis XD
PS: it took me 8 chapters to realise that TBC stands for To Be Continued and not for tuberculosis XD
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January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I really love your story and hope that maybe this review will inspire you to write more.
I really love your character, she's very interesting and multi-faceted, I thought I saw that you'd used the name in a fic before, does that mean you've been developing her core character for awhile?
I like that the story is very natural, everything flows like in reality, unlike many fics where the 'story' is just a flimsy excuse for them to write a hot and steamy scene.
I hope you keep up the great writing, and I thank you for writing this for us readers.
I really love your character, she's very interesting and multi-faceted, I thought I saw that you'd used the name in a fic before, does that mean you've been developing her core character for awhile?
I like that the story is very natural, everything flows like in reality, unlike many fics where the 'story' is just a flimsy excuse for them to write a hot and steamy scene.
I hope you keep up the great writing, and I thank you for writing this for us readers.
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June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i hope you continue this story soon, im eager for more.
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June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is my first post on this site, though I've been reading it for three years now...
I just wanted to say that this is a great story (yes, even with the grammatical and punctuation errors.. :P) and that if you are still here on the site, I would love if you could finish the story.. It's very detailed.. I'm familiar with most mythology, but I don't remember anything like the Draenians. Are they a creation of your own?
One thing, though.. A slight bit more explanation would be nice on some things.. You must remember that not everyone knows the mini-world you've created like you do. You have to remember to present it all, but try not to be too obvious and "narrative" about it.. Presenting it should be part of the story..
But again, you're doing very well..
I just wanted to say that this is a great story (yes, even with the grammatical and punctuation errors.. :P) and that if you are still here on the site, I would love if you could finish the story.. It's very detailed.. I'm familiar with most mythology, but I don't remember anything like the Draenians. Are they a creation of your own?
One thing, though.. A slight bit more explanation would be nice on some things.. You must remember that not everyone knows the mini-world you've created like you do. You have to remember to present it all, but try not to be too obvious and "narrative" about it.. Presenting it should be part of the story..
But again, you're doing very well..
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May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awesome story!! i hope you update soon!
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy SHIT, i'm behind...
i guess that's what happens when you forget the internet payments...
ah well. still a very good story, mate.
{damn, i can't believe i forgot for that long...}
i guess that's what happens when you forget the internet payments...
ah well. still a very good story, mate.
{damn, i can't believe i forgot for that long...}
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MUCH better, to be caught up.
I am very glad to have found a story of this caliber on this site.
PLEASE keep writin' these chaps, mate.
I am very glad to have found a story of this caliber on this site.
PLEASE keep writin' these chaps, mate.
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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are wonderful! I really do love all your stories. My favorite is The Glitch, I really enjoyed that story.
Can't wait for your next update.
Are you going to explain why Jarek seems to dislike Lillyth?
Can't wait for your next update.
Are you going to explain why Jarek seems to dislike Lillyth?
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for answering my questions.
Yeah, it was short but it was still good. I'm not really all that concerned with the length, I just wish you would update more.
Love you story can't wait to read more!
Yeah, it was short but it was still good. I'm not really all that concerned with the length, I just wish you would update more.
Love you story can't wait to read more!
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is really good, been reading it since the beginning, sorry I hadn't reviewed until now. I like how you took the the Harry Potter story and made it you own.
Honestly didn't see the whole Lillyth being Draenian, yeah you mentioned her being a ha;fblood but I thought that just ment halfblood witch. Nice surprise though.
on a side note i kinda hope you'll update your RenGeek story, I really like that one, but maybe only after you finish this one.
So, again, Great update.
Honestly didn't see the whole Lillyth being Draenian, yeah you mentioned her being a ha;fblood but I thought that just ment halfblood witch. Nice surprise though.
on a side note i kinda hope you'll update your RenGeek story, I really like that one, but maybe only after you finish this one.
So, again, Great update.