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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My email is lissagal99@gmail.com. I'll beta.
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He there,
I'm really enjoying your story. I find that your portrayal of the state of mind of a mentally ill person is incredibly convincing. I say this because as someone who suffers from mental illness, I could see so much of the way I sometimes think/act that it almost felt eerie when I was reading it. Especially the way Draco talks to himself and the things he says to himself. Just... wow.
My only complaint is how Hermione is Draco's therapist. They would never let someone Draco (or Harry - is Hermione his therapist as well?) had a history with be his therapist. Maybe it was necessary to the plot, I can't know since you aren't done yet, but it did bother me a bit.
Anyways - I look forward to reading further chapters!
I'm really enjoying your story. I find that your portrayal of the state of mind of a mentally ill person is incredibly convincing. I say this because as someone who suffers from mental illness, I could see so much of the way I sometimes think/act that it almost felt eerie when I was reading it. Especially the way Draco talks to himself and the things he says to himself. Just... wow.
My only complaint is how Hermione is Draco's therapist. They would never let someone Draco (or Harry - is Hermione his therapist as well?) had a history with be his therapist. Maybe it was necessary to the plot, I can't know since you aren't done yet, but it did bother me a bit.
Anyways - I look forward to reading further chapters!
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 8!
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 7!!!
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
god this story is so good! I cant wait for more!!
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic, is so different. Keep writing! :)
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hermione violated the doctor-patient confidentiality rule. Making Draco find out why Harry was there would have been better for your plot this was just...so unrealistic.
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 6!!!
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a very careful exploration coming from a place that most people wouldn't understand, or rather find too difficult to understand. It's a very delicate yet enthralling work, and maybe I can't truly appreciate it, but all the same I'd like to thank you for writing this because it is outreaching in a way that very few works of fiction ever are capable of achieving. I think it's a great testament to the person you are and I look forward to delving deeper into the person that is your Draco.
- Incessant_Darkness
- Incessant_Darkness
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like Passive-Potter. I can live with that. Soo need chapte 5! Why does Harry think no one cares?