rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Wow, that was a long one-shot, and I loved ablsolutely every but of it!
Ron can be such a total git sometimes, glad to have Hermione telling him off. And to end the year pregnant and engaged, YEAH!!! *squeels like an idiot* too lovely!
So, do we get another next year :)

Such an adorable ending. :) I have one minor complaint in an otherwise fantastic fic: it would be nice if you could have someone proofread it before posting. Sorry, little things like this really stand out to me. *hides*

omg so sweet!

Cute Story. I like that Hermione stood up the Pansy, Padma and Parvati. If you decide to edit this, you may want to add in the conversation with Draco and Hermione, after she punches Pansy, about her punching him third year. She have been friends with Harry and Ron for 14 years but you did mention that they still had good and bad history so mentioning that would be appropriate and would give a bit of continuity to the conversation.

Only one critique, the ring description. It should be Carat weight, type of stone, description of band then what type of metal its set in. (ie: 6 ct. Princess Cut Emerald, with a diamond studded band set in white gold.)

My grandmother was a diamond grader and I used to work for a jeweler so I wince when jewelry descriptions aren't right.

wonderfully done. i loved both of the stories. i hope you write more of them.