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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story~
evil draco~~he will make a plan to get harry, right?
huh~~Ilove powerful strong draco~~hehe~~
I want next chapter!!!
evil draco~~he will make a plan to get harry, right?
huh~~Ilove powerful strong draco~~hehe~~
I want next chapter!!!
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i cant wait for more!
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like the beginning, but you have a couple of small corrections that need to be made.
First para-first sentence: They are not "vial" creatures, but VILE creatures.
Third para-first sentence: The young one took the "neck". Should be NECKLACE.
First para-first sentence: They are not "vial" creatures, but VILE creatures.
Third para-first sentence: The young one took the "neck". Should be NECKLACE.
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...it seems something interesting has happened between Hermione, Ron and Ginny? Any plan to tell us soon? And where is Harry staying? It seems that he is not staying with his aunt and uncle, but in an inn?
BTW...I just love the idea of strawberry scent...though now I would recommend Harry to change his shampoo/conditioner/bathing oil or something...XD
BTW...I just love the idea of strawberry scent...though now I would recommend Harry to change his shampoo/conditioner/bathing oil or something...XD
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well this surely is interesting I like the premise hope to see more and learn how you plan on getting Harry & Draco together will you make Harry a weak bottom or will he have a backbone but give up control only to Draco. Will Draco be abusive? Hopefully I find out in you next chapter.
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter. Until then! :)
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story was very good! I loved Draco's possessiveness and his need to have Harry as his own. I'm new to this site, so can you tell me if you can have alerts or updates, and if so, how?
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww please will the next chapter be out soon
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i need more please!
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very interesting, I'm looking forward to see it unfold.