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November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good beginning, but you need a beta, and a good one. You have far too many sentence fragments, a few spelling mistakes, and your line staring with, "They were described as_________" was never completed.
Aside from that i think this may be enjoyable ;)
Aside from that i think this may be enjoyable ;)
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
are you planning to finish this story? I know that if you did it would be very popular. I for one hope you do plan to finish it, if so would you mind sending me an email when you do...or is this story on ffn too? if so I'll have to add it there. thanks
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story!!!!!
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like stories with Draco as a dom. Update soon please
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please will the next chapter be out soon
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I soooo need chapter 2!!!
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January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sound interesting XD
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, I can't wait to read more.
Please update!
Bye
DM
Please update!
Bye
DM
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*gasp*
well i wanna see this plan in action!
one can never get tired of draco fucking harry like an animal! and up against a wall no less!
xD im so pervy (it's not my nickname for nothing lol)
update soon please
well i wanna see this plan in action!
one can never get tired of draco fucking harry like an animal! and up against a wall no less!
xD im so pervy (it's not my nickname for nothing lol)
update soon please
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story