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OMG!! I LOVE this story. The story line in completely new and I love where its going too...I really loved the last chapter and Harry is so cute... You're doing an awesome job, please continue!!!! Can't wait!!

i really do enjoy this story, but how can harry and sev get together sev's part is perfect lily is the best wife ever. and than poor harry is in love with sev how can they get together what will bring them together because sev is going to ruin his marriage for harry and maybe lose his son for him i guess it would be easier if lily was cheating on sev with black. its going to be really hard to plot this story. because i don't want harry to be the home wracker i guess my question would be how will you be able to make harry out to be the victim writher than a mistress? because as it stand right now i like the way sev handle harry and i feel harry wrong his mother. oh and wats up with james?

since you asked nicely, i will give my input! i liked the interaction between severus and harry up until about last chapter. the whole dinner argument just seems so childish. i think i could forgive harry for saying that -seeing as how he's a teen and all but i think severus just lost control there. it seemed very unadult and childish of him and extremely out of character to say those things to harry like that. i do like how it added to the drama though and cant wait to see how he amends things. it's getting more heated and i cant wait to see what happens next.

thanks for ending it there. (sarcasm) i mean seriously, you expect us to WAIT for more? i despise you and your evil torturing ways! :(

anyway, i hope to see more from you soon! i really do like this fanfic. really really!

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glad to see u back to writing this :)

oh yeah we still read this story because you have a good plot but the only reason why is i check for updates about every 3 days love it up date soon.

Ah, yes you are back! I missed your authors note about your beta; found one yet?
Goodness there is no way this two are going to be able to act naturally around others. Imagine how hard it will be for Harry not to cry every time he looks at Severus and now that Severus knows how Harri

thank you yhank you up date again soon

good chapter.

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was a really intense chapter, I really liked it, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! Can

wow! and i thought you'd gone off and disappeared. i'm really glad you're back. the plots starting to get interesting. i cant wait to read more.. make sure you update soon!

as for the worry of people not remembering what's going on, maybe you could do a little recap to remind your readers of whats happened so far.
if not, then that's fine.. cause i remember everything.. lol.
update update update! cant wait to see more.