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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAHH!! I hate hate hate Lucius!! He needs to die a very horrible death!! Please tell me you get rid of him very quickly!!
But other than that, I loved the update and loved it when Severus says,"He's mine"
But other than that, I loved the update and loved it when Severus says,"He's mine"
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooo someone's jealous XD and LMAO!! on the "gangster" almost every parents worst nightmare XD it was funny <3
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
alright, so thanks for the update again. we're still waiting for everything to come together.
What bothers me though, is the lack of Snarry these last few chapters. I know it's all a part of the plot, but I really cant tell where Severus stands. He feels jealousy for Harry and yet, he still loves Lily. Then there's the bit with Lucius.
I'm just worried over how we're already at the 25th chapter and there's been what seems like more of Severus/Lily(lucius) than Snarry. I'm just worried for the outcome of the story because you're saying that the ending is approaching soon and there hasn't been as much severus / harry interaction as i would have hoped.
anyway, on the brighter side, the climax is approaching soon and i cant wait to see how everything turns out. i really hope that i am not disappointed. snarry is just dying out these days and i cant seem to find many fics that i like.
there were a few parts to this chapter that could have been reworded. It's a bit confusing and it had me rereading some of the sentences. A beta would be incredibly helpful. If not, its alright.
Update soon.
What bothers me though, is the lack of Snarry these last few chapters. I know it's all a part of the plot, but I really cant tell where Severus stands. He feels jealousy for Harry and yet, he still loves Lily. Then there's the bit with Lucius.
I'm just worried over how we're already at the 25th chapter and there's been what seems like more of Severus/Lily(lucius) than Snarry. I'm just worried for the outcome of the story because you're saying that the ending is approaching soon and there hasn't been as much severus / harry interaction as i would have hoped.
anyway, on the brighter side, the climax is approaching soon and i cant wait to see how everything turns out. i really hope that i am not disappointed. snarry is just dying out these days and i cant seem to find many fics that i like.
there were a few parts to this chapter that could have been reworded. It's a bit confusing and it had me rereading some of the sentences. A beta would be incredibly helpful. If not, its alright.
Update soon.
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good.
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sinfully sweet i love it i ike how harryis tyig o move on but i love how sev know realized that harrys his but still i want lily to be cheating on sev with siri so i can feel better if harry gets sev.
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally! He admits to his true feelings towards Harry!!!! I'm so Happy!!!
Though... What the fuck is wrong with Lucius? Bloody wanker! Please(down on my knees, hand join with my fingers intertwined, in a preys like pose) have someone kill him in the most painful and most gruesome of ways. (Big puppy dog eyes, in plead) ^_~
Please update chapter 26 soon.
Jan
Though... What the fuck is wrong with Lucius? Bloody wanker! Please(down on my knees, hand join with my fingers intertwined, in a preys like pose) have someone kill him in the most painful and most gruesome of ways. (Big puppy dog eyes, in plead) ^_~
Please update chapter 26 soon.
Jan
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Lucius is such a bitch! This is the second time today a fic has totally shocked me like this, I'm worried for my health lol. Anyways, I LOVE THIS FIC! I also can't wait for you other fic sound really interesting.
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ugh! This story sucks! :( Why is everything getting so difficult for Snape?! Why cant Harry be happy?! Why cant he atleast try to move on, make it look like he's over Sev to make him jealous?! Why'd you make harry so fucking needy?! WhYW HYWHWYWHWYWHWY? uh. I'm so over this.
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wish I had a room like that when I go on holiday. Geeze. Would someone please just smack Lucius or at least push him off the balcony? Grr. Great job. Love your writing style.
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really, really, REALLY has Lucius. What a dink for doing that to Sev. Can you make Malfoy have a heart attack or something? Please tell me that Sev somehow extracts some sort of E-V-I-L revenge on Malfoy. Can't wait for the next chapter.