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Augh! I was hoping that Sev & Lily would divorce and he and Harry would get together. There's always future chapters right??? Great job.

*sighs* Much happier now. I feel like I'm on a roller coaster when I'm reading this story. I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

dame you just keep getting better and better. i love the fact that you updated alot i love that the plot is sooooooo good and the cliffs keep me wanting more. but how will harry feel about his mum getting preg and will harry and sev make it i hope all have to reread again

good chapter.

i was so waiting t hate lily but i can;t she said she din't cheat on sev dame willplease up date soon

i was so waiting t hate lily but i can;t she said she din't cheat on sev dame willplease up date soon

What a surprise. I'm beginning to wonder what's going on with this story. I feel as though no more plot can be added.. and then all of a sudden; Surprise. Another extreme event to add to the story's plot.
I think the story is starting to drag a bit. It was an excellent beginning but the story seems like it's going nowhere. Lily still hasnt found out, Severus still has feelings for Lily, Lucius is still deranged, and Harry is just an immature needy brat. Harry's interaction with Severus makes me feel as though they werent meant to be together at all. He's too needy and immature for such a secret relationship. Especially after he threatens Severus that he'll tell on them. Also after the way he said he'd leave Sev alone.. and breaks that promise almost immediately. As for Lily, when are you planning on making her the bad guy? If ever at all? I dont want Harry to become the villain of the story and yet, it just seems impossible for this to happen because Lily is such a saint.
Lucius is just getting annoying. I wish he'd go away so we could spend our whole time watching Severus resolve his feelings.
Speaking of Severus, I understand the reality of his feelings for Lily but honestly, i feel as though he doesnt deserve either of them. I dispise the fact that he keeps telling himself that he's "protecting them" but its so not true. He's doing it cause he wants them both for himself and the repetition of the words "I'm protecting them" and "I love them both so much" are getting so old. I wish Harry would realize that he deserves better than a man that loves another... and when he realizes this and leaves Sev, Sev will realize his mistake in choosing Lily and go after Harry. Is this all wishful thinking or will it happen eventually? I love this story yet there are so many things about it that frustrates the crap out of me.
I've also noticed the decline in grammatical skill. There are many errors that just makes me squirm in my seat. I've noticed the point where your beta left you. It's not horrible and I do love your writing style.. its just that there are many grammatical errors in your chapters.
Please reply in your next update? I'd love to see your view of your story and I'd love it if you gave us a clue on how you end your story. I'm a loyal reader to the end. I really do enjoy reading this story and I appreciate the frequent updates. I dispise stories that release chapters once a month.
Oh yes, I also read about the new story that you're writing. It seems interesting and I look forward to it. I'll definately be reading it in the future. :) Hope that you update soon. (Though you already do.)

Good chapter.

good chapter.

good chapter.