rate_review Reviews

wow it was all fine and dandy until the very last chapter.

nothing wrong with being human!


life is so short my love, please live yours without regrets.

To fall for someone is one of the greatest experiences in life; enjoy it, suffer it and then move on...

I liked Harry/Severus much more than Lily/Severus so I'm glad at how it ended.

Thought I'm a little worried, how did Harry take his mother's death?

OMG!!! What has he done! Lucius is truly insane! Poor Sirius!

Though, now that he's goon, how is Lilly going to be the bad guy? I don't want Harry to be it. But I don't believe in Lilly "angelic" act. I had always though of her and Sirius having something going on, however, she excuse herself out that one, and now he's dead, either she becomes the bad guy or your going to kill her. I prefer the bad guy.

As for both Lucius and Riddle, I hope something horrendous happens to them both. Severus can't excuse everything for ever with "I'm doing this to protect them", "I want them to be happy, after all isn't that what a father/husband should do?", "I have to put up with Lucius/Riddle, for the greater good of my family"(yes I know those aren't your word, but you know what I mean, right?(Hopefully)) Cause that's just bullshit. (sorry, I don't mean to sound harsh. It's just that it's getting old)...(and I'm trying to help, in my own twisted ways. I'm a person that likes to hear the truth and in return I give it back) I love this story, so very much, I just want to see where this is going.

Hope to see chapter 32 soon. ^_^

ah. reading that again was like a breath of fresh air. i've been busy as hell (school) and i started a few new stories - you know me- and finished a few as yell *clapping*

still love the story!! expecially the ending. it really reflect's Severus' intelectual and complicated mind, which is really the bigges compliment i can give.

~ Extraho

wow that was really good but the eneding was kind of cut off. i like the fact the harry and sev are together.answer to your question yes we are only human i think that if a person loves another family member not related by blood than they should fallow their heart. as far as incest yuck but i also no that i had sex at a young age and my partner was older than me i also had a kid in my teen's so now threwing stone's from me

please make Potter die a slow, horrid, vile death. I really do love this story.

While the ending total surprised me, I think it worked. I really liked it. While I'm not much of a Snarry AU, I really did enjoy this. I can't wait to read your other works.

OMG! I know I put on my last review that the only way that I saw this ending with H/S staying together, was Lilly dying or Harry becoming the bad guy, but I didn't think you would truly kill her.

And more so in that way.

Wow, this was truly a great story. ^_~

As For your questions, in your AN's. No, I don't think that it's wrong to love someone that is family by heart but not by blood. You see, I, when I was younger(think ending of high school) my first and only true love, just happen to be a family member by my father's side. We started dating in secret, and about a year and a half later his mother found us in a compromising position, needless to say that she went crazy on us. After that, the whole family started getting into business that weren't their own.

A little after two years being together, he called everything off.

Now, you could say, oh well, it was just teen love, nothing that could last for long. But what most don't understand is that he truly was my first and only love. And for that reason, it hurt more so, when he broke up with me, because of the family. We tried just about everything for the first time together. My first true kiss, you see, you haven't been truly kiss until you feel the lips of that one person, the one you give your all to, against your own. That one person that no matter how much time you spend together, you just can't get enough of them, that one person that you could only see yourself with till your dying days, the one person that no matter how many good looking men(or women) passes by you, you only think and want them, and only them, no one else. My first sexual act, well, we did almost everything.

That's how you know when you've found your other half, that one person that completes you. (corny I know, but no less untrue) Unfortunately, we didn't get our happy ending. If you leave fear enter your heart and thoughts, you relinquish your hold on love, true love. We had talked and planned on a future together. Started building for that time, where we could start our own family, our own life's. That all came to an end because he got scared, and walked out. I only thought about him, I only felt desire for him no one else, when we kiss, it was only him on my thoughts, when we were apart it was only him I thought of, when I woke up and went to bed it was only him on my mind. It's always been him for me. Even after ten years, it's still him I think about, him I dream of, him I desire above all else, just him.

I am marry, with two kids. I love my husband, but I am not IN love with him. He knows this from the start. And he respect this. You could say that ever since that heartbreaking day, I've lived a half life or more like I have a half soul. I still love him, and from what my sisters and mother have told me, it appear he still loves me(whether it's true or not, I will never know.)

He has a girl friend, they've been together for almost three years. The funny thing about her is that she looks a lot like me. Only she's more like a Barbie,(very plastic) while I am more... into rock. There, is the greatest difference between both of us. She can't stand to hear my name in a conversion, let alone see me in person. As for me, I don't hate nor dislike; but it does hurt to see her with him. He hardly stays in the same room as me. And to think we're family! O_O

Believe me, it's not worth thinking about blood or non-blood relation. Follow your heart and never, ever let anyone ever tell you other wise. Be true to yourself. I'm happy, but I am not complete in this life time, I always feel there's something else missing in my life, and I also know that it's him. I thank god every night, for giving me my two beautiful babies, they feel a part of that whole in my soul.

It is only human to love and be love. God and every other thing we believe in, tells us that love is the key in life, so why not love a family member, if said family member completes and make YOU happy?

Jan

All i can say is dame that was hot i love that part where harry say give it back.
luc is a sick person will updated soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee i love it