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I'm a little confused. Is this supposed to be Snarry or is this all going to be SnapexLily? If so, shouldn't this fall under another category? I'm just asking, because the way you describe everything, it seems as if Snape thinks of Harry as only this son. This isn't a flame. It's just an inquiry.
If this is a snarry, when is there going to be some Snape on Harry action?

can't wait to read more. I'm really enjoying.

This is certainly interesting so far. lol. Though, Jimmy IS Snape's biological son, right? I'm sure of it, but Jimmy is a nickname for James, isn't it? I figured it would be odd for them to name their son after her ex husband. lol. Anyway, I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

update soon

its an interesting story so far. i hope you update soon!!!

OMGOSH. i love this story. i think the whole plotline is totally hott. GO SNARRY! woop.

this is certainly an interesting start. I can't wait to see where this story is headed. Please update soon...

I've got to say that the ending of this first chapter had me chuckling happily. Please update chapter 2 soon. ^_^

I'm not sure that I like this fic. I don't do incest ones (this technically isn't but you know what I mean) but I may continue to read if it turns out that Harry is older (older teenager) and it's consentual. I'm not prudish by any stretch of the imagination but don't like incest fics.
This isn't a flame. It is extremely emotional and evocative. Your writing style and characterisation are excellent, I just don't think it's my cup of tea. I would definitely consider reading other work by yourself that is more suited to my tastes, judging by the quality of this one though.

Good start.