rate_review Reviews

i must say i not only like this story i like the fact that you suggested a review in a very good way. back to storyi want more keep up

Awesome! more soon, pls. :)

I think this is a wonderful story. Thank you. Two things I would like to comment on though (I hope you don't mind, because this is just my opinion, for what it is worth): First, I think if would be great if you slowed down the pace of the story a bit and allowed for a little more character development. Second, before posting give a check through or perhaps have a beta check your writing. Small mistakes such as using "patronage" rather than "parentage" when mentioning Draco's new parents can be a bit distracting. Please continue to write. Congratulations on a very unique story line.

so love this story its cute i like the plot my only problem is demanding reviews because alot people just read and if the stories really good they don,t think about reviewing you should look at the hit instead. i also no because i read 1000s of stories and hardliy ever review

woot! Ha! Ron got the what for! Yay for Harry and Snape and the Weasley's smart enough not to be. Update soon.

I love this story and the way you gave Harry a really big family and people who love him unconditionally.
please continue it and I will review it every time.

I like it. Please update soon.

Are you trying to make everyone Potters? Just how many children are Har and Sev going to have by the ending of this story?!!!

Love it! Write more!

i love it please update pretty please