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that smut scene was hot! draco is the submissive one but he can be very demanding!that's a good thing for harry though.haha. and they are mated!it's wonderful how you integrated the mating and the smut and the awww-so-cute-fluff at the end!draco is now claimed but i don't think harry has any idea of what just happened,am i right?am so glad he isn't there just for the sex anymore. i was so worried that there might be an impending angst about harry leaving draco to believe he was in it for fun only. harry's snide comments about ginny were hilarious and gave a vivid picture of how much a slut ginny really is. am so excited for the next part.you make very good and cleaar description of things that it isn't very hard to visualize. again though, some typos, but overall, a really good job! wishing you more inspiration! ;) ps. i was so touched to see you dedicated that chappy for me. i haven't written any stories yet coz i don't have a very solid plot bunny - i want to put so much i forget the whole point of what i wanted to write in the first place. but thank you, really.

ooops!i was just rereading the last chapter when i realized i forgot to comment on you new fic. anyways, i think its cool.harry on the prowl for draco. oooh, i just hope draco isn't a downright snob here. and i really hope harry gets back a t ginny and ginny suffers much towards the end, crazy bint that she is.is this going to be an agressive-dominant-harry story?i just love the way you made harry in your current fic - fits him really.your idea is really good and i hope you have much inspiration and passion in writing it as you did in this fic. good luck! ;)

Erotic. Very erotic. Love it.

hi!this is a really great fic. all the elements i look for are here. i was planning a chapter-by-chapter review but once i got to the end of the page, i couldn't stop myself from clicking next.i just can't get enough of it. ok, admittedly, there are grammatical and typographical errors. but they certainly do not outweigh the wonderful plotline of the story. your chracterizations of harry and draco are brilliant and uniquely done. i adore the outwardly-confident-but-inwardly-shy-and-conscious draco. and of course, daring-and-dominant-but-still-confused harry is just lovable. the background/supporting story is also wonderful (sev/lucius part was unexpected, draco taking care of apathetic-turned-crazy narcissa, harry and draco brushing off evil ginny). amidst all that, you manage to focus on ahrry and draco. the smut scenes are hot but passionate while the supporting storyline is touching and humorous. you have written a great fic so i hope you have no plans of abandoning it - it would really be a great loss to us readers, honest. hope you have lots and lots of inspiration for the rest of this fic. thank for sharing a great fic. and oh, for posting chapters even if they are unbetaed just because you don't want your readers to wait that long. ;)

Nnnnnoooo! You evil, evil author! How can you leave us hanging with a slashy cliffy like that! It is strange (in a good way) how this fic has transformed into a creature fic but I suppose the original plot line limited you, whereas, seeing the popularity for it has grown, with this one you can prolong it further.

Love the Lucius and Severus byplot (I love this 'ship), I hope you are going to include more of this. Good call! See you next update.

yes yes yes OMG they are finally going to do it.they aren't going to be interupted are they? i hope not. man is it going to be good when afterward all the drama starts anew and new problems come up. Ginny is starting to scare me.

Good Ron, and Harry gets Draco, of course!

harry should definately get draco .
ginny is annoying :]

do you even have to ask about who gets draco it's harry DUH!!!!!!!

Awsome story so far....please dont make ron bad, I know a lot of people hate him and make him bad but come on, give the character a break.