rate_review Reviews

Nice story, too bad you have abandoned it.

I like where the story is headed and would love for u to finish it

He still hasn't looked at Hermione?

Very well written and involving. It's really nice that you've chosen Angelina to be the first to really get Harry's hormones flowing. And the earlier scene of Cho and Marietta were amazing! Anxiously awaiting more!

I recalled reading this story the first time several months back and wondering then if you were going to continue with it. I can't even tell what changes you've made, it's been too long, but I'm glad to hear that you'll be updating it regularly. What I initially imagined was going to be a straight-up porn fantasy centered around the ROR, has delightedly become a thoughtful piece on how young men perceive the mysteries of a woman. You've kept Harry's curiosity and added a healthy dose of hormones, but you've still managed to keep him sweet and caring, even though his voyeurism is a continual invasion of their privacy. At least he's learning something. I was really impressed with his feelings after he'd experienced the transference of Marietta's emotions during her passionate clinch with Cho. I also like the idea of how quickly he picks up on amorous details and uses them so earnestly. We already know that Harry is adaptable and a quick study when it comes to matters of interest. I just always felt in my bones that Harry would be a natural lover once he got over his shyness around women.

It's really turning into an enjoyable story, almost a meditation on the different ways men and women approach sexuality. I'd like to see some development between Harry and Hermione because you utilize the chemistry between them to great effect, but then your Harry seems to have chemistry with all the girls. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I love the story, I cant wait until he goes all the way with all these lovly girls. I would love to see him with all the Grif. Chasers all at once. And I cant wait to see him with Ginny, keep up the good work

Glad you're back!

I'm kinda surprised he hasn't looked for anyone new yet.

Playing around with Angelina is good and all, but I hope he ends up hooking up seriously with Hermione. I've really liked their interactions so far.

Bonus if she likes watching too, and they enjoy the RoR together =)

Hey! this is really good stuff. I thought it was going to be all PWP...but I was really, really pleased to discover that you're actually building a great story around voyeuristic erotica and an unexpected pairing. Of course, I love Harry & Hermione...that will always and forever be the combination that does it for me...but you've done an excellent job her. Your grammar, dialog, descriptions, etc. are all superior and you should be very proud of what you've written.

I look forward to reading your next chapter!!!

Regards,

the_scribbler

I enjoyed that.
I noticed however that you slipped into first person at one point, so that could be corrected. Apart from that that was very well written ^_^

I look forward to reading more.

great story!!! i hope to hear more. i remember reading this before and it looks like it hasn't been updated in a while. please update? thanks,
oldman543