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for The Erlking

by AislingSiobhan

schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My, my... Harry is a big boy now then :\ I can't wait to see how other kids are going to react to Harry... Hmmm... foremost thought would be either fear or intense lust... or both at the same time! And Severus... I really wonder about him... After all if he cares for Harry that much then I think he's going to be very protective of him to the point of where he would think Harry like his own son... What's with the horns on Harry's head? When did he acquire them or was it just that I missed it at some point or don't remember it...? Anyway, thanks for the chapter! I'm so sorry for you test, I know how it can be when teacher just asks something you have no idea...
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I so love this fic.
Entraps all senses and lures you in, completely ...and very well witten.
I so cant wait to read more...
I love the way Harry is turning out.
I will miss Harry and the Erlking together.
They fit each-other.

...and tests are always a thorn in my life.
Good luck.
person Rokkis
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When I read Norway... I thought, hey cool! As we are very rarely featured in any fanfiction! But then I discovered that you are destroying are fauna!! Especially our dragons! *shakes fist*
As for the chapter! Brilliant! Am very much looking forward to the finally exchange.
I hope the Voldie very quickly learns that Harry is far more then some trophy wife and that he takes him seriously. After all, as cheesy as it sounds, two magical cores are better then one!

Cheers!
person Jan
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, he's finally big! Can't wait for the Voldy and Harry action to begin ^_^

Please update chapter 9 soon.

Jan ^_~
person alma
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person Em
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't suppose Harry could become a phoenix animagus, so forever live and remain the Erlking's beloved?.. no, oh well never mind.
Another excellent chapter, love the inclusion of other Gothic horror poetry and fairy tales. I like the imagery in this chapter as well, you really bring Harry's character to life as his appearance is illustrated so well that I have a very clear picture of what he looks like in my head. Also love the description of Voldemort's eyes.
Can't wait for the next chapter,
well done and keep writing! :)
person Jan
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update chapter 8 soon. ^_^

Jan
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this fic.
So well written and I love the twist of old tales.
I was thrilled to read another chapter,
and beautiful done I may add.
Cant wait to read more.
person chineseartist
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
still loving it! it's great. can't wait to see chapter seven.
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahh so sweat so sour so utterly unique i would laude this story from the tallest roof top and into the deepest dungeon and let the praise i heap upon it be worthy of this fare. For it is fitting that a 'child' such as i should feast and sup upon not the husk nay not the cochl but the true fare. And this true fare you lay before me and spread out a feast ayy a feast from the darkest of the Fair