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for Gone Astray

by AlexisRose

person hp_bcn
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, really nice start. hope you post soon, can't believe you guys leave us with that kind of cliffhangers!

schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the new chapter!! Happy new year!
person mhaj78
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh don't stop there!!! Wow, this has the makings of a couple more chapters! I'm totally cool with shorter chaps if it means quicker updating...and quicker to get to the smut. :) Bring it on!
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg hot and so have to have more!
person distinctlyME
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! too cute. love that there was a brief background that let you understand some of their history. loved that she wont give into him even though she wants to badly. love that he knows she wants too. just love it.
person Crittenz
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More chappies soon pwease?
person JayJay
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*chants* Smut, smut, smut, smut!
Awsome story so far. Different story line compared to many though
has potential to be something much bigger with a good amount of smut :P
Cant wait to read more!
jj
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. It has a nice plot and the way you portray your caracters is spot on! Really good job, oh and i dont mind a little bit of smut!!
person Brittney
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha this story is cute. I can't wait for the next update.
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow poor drac0. i need more!!!