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Yay for the full Chapter 7, its long so I can see why it took awhile to get out. I decided to wait untill it was complete before I reviewed. Evil Hunters attacking Harry like that I hope they get whats coming to them. Oh will Draco be making an appearance soon, I figure he would since he gets a life Rose and all. Well here are my choices for colors:
Koenma-gold
Yukina-ice blue
Botan-blue
Genkai-grey
Kuwabara-orange
Shizuru-brown
Snape-dark blue almost black aka blueblack
Remus-amber
Sirius-purple
Bill-sea green
Charlie-green
Draco-light silver
Lucius-dark(sorta tarnished) silver

Oh will Keiko need a rose or is she not part of the pack? If she is my choice is pink. I like her but if it doen't work for the story I can understand her not being added especially if you make Yusuke gay. Keep up the good work and I look forward to more. I am off for the next 2 weeks so I need to be entertained otherwise I will go stir crazy, so update soon.

I hope that Harry helps Yusuke beat that demon up. He could probably also help Genkai train him when the tournament is over.

Great chapter keep up the good work.

good chapter, I like it

Love the story! I hope that this will be a Harry/Kurama pairing. Can Harry be a Spirit Detective and work with the others? I bet that it was Ron who told Dumbledore. How else did Dumbledore know about a black kitsune? I say that he should kill him the next time Harry sees him.

cool chapter keep up the good work.

Ohhh Ohhh Yes! I am so looking forward to the next chapter. It will be interesting to see how the tournament turns out with Harry there, considering he already knows who the Demon is. The explanations helped with understanding Harry better. Also you said something about a link but I didn't see one. Im happy Remus is okay and Snape is with him, they just seem like a good match. Well Im tired now so I think its time for me to sleep, and as all ways love the story and look forward to more.

good chapter, and the info about Kitsunes was very much apreciated, are Remus and Severus in Japan, in the same apartment building as Harry?

cool chapter keep up the good work.

It wasn't a bad Chapter, it was actually very interesting, so no worries okay? Although I am wondering what happened to Harry, did Remus betray him? I hope not I like Remus, always thought he would do better with Snape then Tonks though. And the whole destroying the three world thing makes me wonder who it is. Will Harry meet Hiei soon? He and Kurama always were my faviort characters. Anyway this is one of my faviort stories and every time I log on I check to see if you have updated. I like how you have enough detail to get things interesting but not too much. A lot of times authors will skip over details and rush the plot making it feel too sudden or they have tons of detail and then you just want to skip some of it just to see what happens. I think this is my longest review yet but that might be because I am avoiding cleaning. So help me avoid some more and update soon please, it would really make my day.