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Hello, I just wanted to say that I enjoy your story. You make your characters come to life and sound full, which is quite amusing to me. There is one thing that I would like to point out that would allow your story to run smoother. I notice that you jump from the first person to the third person a lot. This confuses the reader momentarilly and takes away from the story that you are writing. This is the only flaw that I noticed so far, but if you would like I can help correct your story as a second Beta? Sorry for the mini English lesson but I am in English 207 (A college course) And all of this has been drilled into my mind now. @_@ Anyways, I hope my suggestion has helped you out a bit and if you would like you can email me requesting for more suggestions on how to correct a story. Other then that You have a great concept going and I can't wait to read more.

I forgot to add my email so here is is: BoyHuggles@Gmail.com There we are. All set now. ^^

i want to read more soo please please write more soon ^_^ thanks

love it More please

Ooooohhhhh.I loved it. I have some suggestions. First. Pairings? I think the Harry/Kurama/Hiei one you suggested would be a damn sexy pairing. Colors though.
Yukina-Ice Blue
Genkai-Pale/Neon Blue
Botan-Dark Pink
Remus-Amber/Gold

That's all I can think of.The roses are supposed to be from makai right? So the unusual colors are explained right? Update soon as RL allows.
Ja
Sakura Maxwell-Minamino
aka
Eternity/Hitokiri Shi Kuroi

Great chapter I hope that I get to read more soon.
Here are my suggestions for colors:
Koenma- bluish /purple color of his clothing as a teenager
Yukina - light green-healing energy
Botan- pink like her kimono
Genkai - (Ending soon)- light green- spirit wave color
Shizuru-dark orange- similar to Kuwabara because they are family
Snape- dark green- potions
Remus- gold- color of the moon
Sirius- midnight blue

Color for rose: Koenma/Brown - Yukina/blue - Botan/Pink - Genkai/Dark Pink
I have 1 question. Since Dumbledork is evil and the wizard world stupide, Voldemort is he good or bad ?

Yay! Your Back! It has been awhile so I am glad you have come back. As for that reviewer, ignore him. It's called good writing when you develop you characters and not make them super powerful instantly. You are developing your chatacters so they are more realistic. In real life you don't become strong by snapping your fingers, you have to work for it. Grr anyway I like your story, fighting and all. I hope you continue writing and just ignore the idiots. (p.s. if that was the review exactly then he can't say much because his spelling is horrible, I know I have issues but at least I am not afraid of the dictionary. lol now I am ranting but as a fellow writer I understand where your coming from)

First things first who is going to be harrys love interest?? he is going to go to the dark toruament?? Then for the life force roses:
Koenma-Gold(being the prince and all)or gray(prince of dead)
Yukina-the color of her tear gems
Botan- either the color of her eye or hair
Genkai the light pink of her hair when she was young
Kuwabara-orange(the color of his hair
Shizuru-??
Snape-purple and gold(because of being bonded)
Remus-gold andd pruple(because of being bonded)
Sirius-gryfffindor red
Bill-light green
Charlie-dark green
Draco-silver(???)
Lucius-???
those are my ideas please post more!!!!
Kisses
ladyroo

good chapter

I need some help deciding what colour the Life Force Roses are going to be. Here are some of the ones I already know:

White