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C. Start from the next chapter where the Saint Beasts ark is over and only retold at the beginning of the chapter while I actually begin where Yusuke awakens in the room of Kuwabara

any how this is really good
as for my vote i was think fo ganki(sp) you could use the color odf her spirt energy
pink for boton and i don't know for the others.

I really want to see the whole arc, but I also want to see then beat the main guy.

To me I really don't mind much, I just love reading your story. So please keep up the good work!!!

I love the mind speak that you put in there, it shows to me that Kruma is going to look out for the Harry.

That makes me giddy.

Your ectra is that what I think is going to happen? Both Kruma and Hiei are going to mate with Harry? Am I right or wrong?

You should place that part in your story, can't wait to read what you write

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Very nice. I loved the poem. I just re-read all the chapters cause I couldn't remember if I'd read them or not. lol. My memory is a little hazy right now. lol. I definitely hafta say that for pairings Hiei/Harry or Hiei/Harry/Kurama.
Rose colors. Genkai-Pale Blue(Her Spirit energy is a Bluish color so it would fit.
Botan-Pink(because she seems to have an obsession with said color(remind me of Relena from Gundam Winglol)
Yukina-Ice Blue
Oh yeah the half Veela Bill falls for is Fluer DeLaCour The Champion chosen by the Goblet of fire for Beauxbatons during the Tri-Wizard Tournament. Oh yeah and that nasty reviewer that said all that shit bout you and dissed anime and manga and said Dragon Ball went nowhere. Bullshit Dragon Ball was the pre cursor to the events in Dragon Ball Z and Dragon Ball GT. Ranma1/2 is meant to be comedic and slapstic simialr to Akira Toriyama's Dragon Ball as the creaor is Rumiko Takahashi the creator of InuYasha. Hell I agree wholeheartedly that in stories like this the character needs to build their own strength. Yusuke does. Kuwabara does. Even Hiei and Kurama get stringer as the series progresses. In epic stories it is a pretty much required thing that whiole the main Char(s) may have some power or none they usually get stronger throughtraining and living through the experiences they do. Lif is one big school and Everyone a person meets it's either a Teacher or a Student or both. Anyway now that that long ass rant/review/ info thjingy is finished kinda. I love the story. Definitely curious as to what happens. Oh I haven't seen you make any mentions as to Hermione? What (if any) is her role or will Hermione not really be in this fic? And I haven't heard any mentions as to Voldemort either. Will Harry still have to fight and kill Voldemort? Very Curoius bout how that would play out if that is the case. OOHHHH Will there be Graphic Lemons? heh I'm a Hentai what can I say **shrugs** lol. Hope you update soon.
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nice poem

Koenma - Dark blue
Yukina - light blue
Botan - dark pink
Genkai - light pink
Shizuru - honey brown
Sirius-???
Bill ??
Charlie??
Lucius - gray

This was a wonderful chapter! I can't wait to read more. I really have enjoyed what I have read so far. As for the Life Force Roses colors, I have a few ideas. I hope they are helpful.

Koenma - Dark Blue with Brown swirls
Yukina - Pink
Botan - Light Blue
Genkai - Orange with Yellow and Pink swirls
Shizuru - Jade Green (I can't remember who this person is, so I just chose some colors)
Snape - Black with Royal Purple swirls (I chose the Royal Purple because of his Vampire-Dark Fae blood)
Remus - Dark Brown with Forest Green swirls (these colors fit him because he is a Werewolf)
Sirius - Midnight Blue
Bill - Yellow with Red and Black swirls (because those are the colors I see when I think of a cures breaker)
Charlie - Red with Yellow and Orange swirls (sort of a fire immitation because he works with Dragons)
Draco - Silver with Red, Orange and Yellow swirls (because siver is completely a Malfoy color and the others in immitation of a Dragons flames)
Lucius - Green wit Silver swirls (because whether he is good or bad, he is just too Slytherin not to have those colors)

Well, good luck and happy writing!

I like where you are taking this story. I look forward to more chapters. Here are my votes for life rose colors:
Koenma - blue
Yukina - pale blue
Botan - lavender
Genkai - pink
Shizuru - brown
Snape - dark green
Remus - amber
Sirius - navy blue
Bill - maroon
Charlie - dark purple
Draco - gray
Lucius - silver

good chapter