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for Wizard Hanyou

by sephrothlay

schedule November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
There are roses with two colors. Why not make charlies rose red with yellow edges?
person twilightserius
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
dude this is cool can you keep going but what the hell is with people either kidnapping him or overpowering him so easily can't his magic react to his danger even with the bonds n would he still be a submissive if dumblefucker hadn't bound him?
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! How is Kuroune going to keep Harry captive? Will he eventually get in touch with the gang? Will he not get to see them until the beginning of the tournament? Will Kuroune end up in the gang and will he fall for someone? I like the idea of Harry being with Kurama and Hiei. Also, what about sensui? Afterall, he owes his a life debt, but he won't hurt his pack. Will Sensui just kidnap him again and keep him captive? Please write more soon! I can't wait for the next chapter.
person OHMYRA
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Azure for Charlie and Purple for Lucius
person Angel Of Storms
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
For Charlie's rose colour how about an orange-red. You know kinda like fire. He does work with dragons after all.
person April
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, good story. Can't wait til there's more chapters. I like how Harry's not alone in any of this, and that he's going to get help from those around him, even if he's not really wanting it. Pairings are good as well, and I like how you don't really 'bash' any characters, but write them as characters instead of... annoyances.

Charlie - bronze
Lucius (I don't remember how to spell his name >.<; Sorry.) - light green

Keep up the good work.
person Rho
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do so love YYH/HP crossovers there are not enought good ones and this one is great.

Charlie - red orange
Lucius - pale yellow
person Pherazen
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
We really need more YYH/HP yaoi fics. Thanks for writing some for us. :)

As for colours, how about bronze for Charlie and purple for Lucius?
person Lilyth Celestyn
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story and I hope to see more of it. I've really enjoyed the way you merged the two story-lines. It flows really well in most places. The differences and similarities that you've slowly wove in with Harry must have taken a lot of time to create. I think that you have done a real justice to YYHHP crossovers, thanks.
person Anon
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good, very good!