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for I'll Be Home For Christmas

by Jilliane

schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*dies hysterically laughing* nooo not menstruation!!! hahahahahaha
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Severus. Things just don't get any easier for him, do they?

Love it. Love Harry going volcanic. Love Severus getting Ron to help him out. Brilliant.
person lye
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the ending of this chapter. Menstruation, every males worst nightmare. Can't wait for your next chapter.
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i found this story i didn't read it in the beginning because it said one shot but i stop to read it to knight and i found that i really like it its cut i like how the plot is going i like how the character's are playing-out update soon thank you
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story. Can't wait for more. Great job. I love how you write Severus. I think you hit him right on the dot here.
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!
I love this story its just so good please write more soon
person Ladynight
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice job...so do I see babysitting in severus's future?
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bueno! Always bueno. You do this story justice, Jilliane. This has to be one of my most recent favorites. Brava!
person yaoified
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
'Don't Know How To Fix This' - an appropriate title given your AN notes! Like many writers, I think I understand your frustration with non-reviewers. After all, if they've got to this chapter in the story, they MUST have found something they liked! And, sadly, I don't know how to 'fix' it so that people review.

Anyway, the chapter itself is lovely. I loved the way Molly tripped over "wife" and the way they were reconciled - yummy yum! The ending too was very sweet, just hinting at the emotions Harry was feeling was perfect. Great stuff!