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Aw, Severus is trying to do the right thing. He deserves better than such flippant behaviour from Harry. At least he loves the little bugger enough to do right by him. I can't wait till the babies are born.

Well, Ginny Weasley. Severus might have some reason to be jealous if Ginny is the one Harry goes to with his problems. Is there a chance that Harry will go back to Ginny if Severus tells Harry he doesn't want the baby? She does come from a big family and knows Harry very well. Poor Harry, always wanting a family of his own. Not fair of him to tell Molly first, is it?

Sometimes I think Harry is just about the biggest ass there is. He is so childish sometimes, he is going to be a father/mother it is about time he stopped his whining. I think he is the jealous one. Jealous of what Severus felt for his mother. And just because he doesn't remember her as a mother doesn't mean he should refer to her by her first name. He needs to grow up. He is a man now, no longer a boy.

LOL, Poor Severus, he wasn't sure about his "baby", now he finds out their are two, and girls on top of it. Secretly I hoped it would be a girl. Molly will whip them both into shape in no time. Grandmum Molly, to Severus Snape's children. LOL.

This story is so good. I've really been enjoying reading it and I'm excited for more. So, please post more! -gives cookies-

Chapter 16 - WOW! I actually felt my stomach drop at this bit: "Oh no, don't apologise," Severus said growled, "after all, isn't this the sort of thing you bloody Gryffindors live for? Far be it for me to spoil your fun for the day, Harry, since you've had precious little to be happy about lately. What with the mood swings and the temper tantrums, and your clothes not fitting, and the kitchen's not having the proper cream crackers for you, and my not being able to say anything right lately. By all means, have your joke at my expense, isn't that what I'm here for, Harry? I did, after all, promise to take care of you for the rest of our lives."

But the yummy smut more than made up for it! Bravo for another well exceuted chapter!

Just lovely so far. :) It's great--despite being in a very OOC situation (what with the pairing, mpreg, etc), I really feel like your Harry and Severus, and Ron, Hermione, Poppy, for that matter, are spot on. Excellent. Can't wait for more.

that was sooooo very beautiful. it's those rare, fleeting moments that get us through the everyday shit of a real relationship. loving someone forever isn't an emotion you feel... it's a choice you make everyday. i think you captured that reality in all it's bittersweetness. well done.

AWWW! So sweet! Awesome story!
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The ending is so cute ^_^ I really liked it. And he was green, I love that they have potion to cure specifically first years lol