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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw! Cute names!
Great chapter!
Great chapter!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus! I really do feel sorry for him having to put up with crabby Harry! You write this so well I can picture the guilt on Severus' face as he sneaks off for some rest! Looking forward to the birth - which should be soon, right? RIGHT?! SP
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July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DAMN YOU!!!!!!! I HATE CLIFF HANGERS!!!! by the way, love the story......ALTHOUGH......i have been around many pregnant women.....my ex-wife included....and they weren't all that bad....u made harry into the ulitmate preggo man.....he's nvr been like this in any other fic....but this IS ur fic so I guess what ever u want flies....what are u gonna name the grls? please, nothing that no one has ever heard of or unisex names. I also think u should make them call harry "mummy" or something like that. that kinda stuff is the funniest stuff ever. lol! good luck with the fic, update soon please!!!!!!!!!!
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July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DAMN YOU!!!!!!! I HATE CLIFF HANGERS!!!! by the way, love the story......ALTHOUGH......i have been around many pregnant women.....my ex-wife included....and they weren't all that bad....u made harry into the ulitmate preggo man.....he's nvr been like this in any other fic....but this IS ur fic so I guess what ever u want flies....what are u gonna name the grls? please, nothing that no one has ever heard of or unisex names. I also think u should make them call harry "mummy" or something like that. that kinda stuff is the funniest stuff ever. lol! good luck with the fic, update soon please!!!!!!!!!!
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
To be honest, I love the humor of this story. I do feel for Severus. The Barnabas the Barmy reference was hysterical. Trust Severus to consider the actions of that wizard to be ill-advised. And then the whole Severus being grateful to Ron for anything is too funny.
I like how you keep a scowling Snape even as he's giving Harry a hug.
Aaaagh! Poppy Pomfrey talking about orgasms is enough to almost squick me.
The scene with the doctor, the whole concerned Severus bit and the last line left me with tears in my eyes.
Great job.
I like how you keep a scowling Snape even as he's giving Harry a hug.
Aaaagh! Poppy Pomfrey talking about orgasms is enough to almost squick me.
The scene with the doctor, the whole concerned Severus bit and the last line left me with tears in my eyes.
Great job.
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sqqquuuueeeeee! The babies are coming!!!!!!
Whoopteedooo!
Whoopteedooo!
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow..you updated this while I was reading.
I can't wait to see how the next chapter goes.
I can't wait to see how the next chapter goes.
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9
Twins. I'm laughing so hard I'm crying. And girls to boot. Heee Heeee.
"Twins. Girls. Twin girls." That's so funny. His reaction is just wonderful and so Severus. Wardrobe pointers. That was funny.
Chapter 10
For some reason this chapter seems more put together. It's alittle more explanatory and indepth. I like it.
I loved the proposal or almost non-proposal. Harry saying that about Ginny cracked me up.
Chapter 11
I'm surprised that Ron was so understanding, but then the way you've explained the pregnancy, I guess he would have to be a total git to be anything but happy. Hermione's reaction was precious and very much in character. (I can tell you don't like her by the way.)
Twins. I'm laughing so hard I'm crying. And girls to boot. Heee Heeee.
"Twins. Girls. Twin girls." That's so funny. His reaction is just wonderful and so Severus. Wardrobe pointers. That was funny.
Chapter 10
For some reason this chapter seems more put together. It's alittle more explanatory and indepth. I like it.
I loved the proposal or almost non-proposal. Harry saying that about Ginny cracked me up.
Chapter 11
I'm surprised that Ron was so understanding, but then the way you've explained the pregnancy, I guess he would have to be a total git to be anything but happy. Hermione's reaction was precious and very much in character. (I can tell you don't like her by the way.)
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12
That's really sad. I had never thought about who would have 'the talk' with Harry. No one, huh? That makes me want to cry.
Okay, that was just too hot. I love how you write the sex. It is... well... hot.'
Chapter 13
Severus' thoughts on parenting are well done. I can see him being just that concerned. I think anyone with his background would be. I also envision him as being quite doting of his own children. Well, you know that. I love that last line. Severus being jealous of Ron Weasley because of his parenting abilities make sense.
Chapter 14
Sweetness. Yep, the whole hormone thing is just wonderful isn't it?
As I said before, your sex scenes are hot and when you add the element of the love they obviously feel for each other, entirely satisfying.
That's really sad. I had never thought about who would have 'the talk' with Harry. No one, huh? That makes me want to cry.
Okay, that was just too hot. I love how you write the sex. It is... well... hot.'
Chapter 13
Severus' thoughts on parenting are well done. I can see him being just that concerned. I think anyone with his background would be. I also envision him as being quite doting of his own children. Well, you know that. I love that last line. Severus being jealous of Ron Weasley because of his parenting abilities make sense.
Chapter 14
Sweetness. Yep, the whole hormone thing is just wonderful isn't it?
As I said before, your sex scenes are hot and when you add the element of the love they obviously feel for each other, entirely satisfying.
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15
Severus doesn't realize exactly what those ICBM's called baby boys can do while changing them.
Dunh dunh dunh da dhun. Oh my, I was wondering how thatwould work. I wonder if it will squick either of them.
It's ironic that it's Severus having that dream, and not Harry. (Meat and two veg-- I'm still laughing.)
I think Severus is overthinking the girl thing. Menstruation is a long way off. He'll be an old hand by then. Fun chapter.
Chapter 16
Somehow,I get the feeling the author has lived this part of the pregnancy problem. It's well written and really poignant how they keep missing each other.
That was just sweet that Harry came home to show him that. Ilove Severus' lack of speech, but that Harry can still feel what his partner can't express.
Chapter 17
J, I loved the near poetic quality of Severus' grousing about the entire pregnancy experience at the beginning of the chapter. I think the poor man has it line, verse and chapter.
'terrifying mood swings' that about describes it from a man's perspective... From a woman's too.
Minerva's speech might have been more effective if we could have seen some of Severus' reactions to it, even if it was his internal monologue on the matter. I can't imagine he woud have much of an outward reaction to her story.
I did like Harry's little soliloquy to the girls.
Severus doesn't realize exactly what those ICBM's called baby boys can do while changing them.
Dunh dunh dunh da dhun. Oh my, I was wondering how thatwould work. I wonder if it will squick either of them.
It's ironic that it's Severus having that dream, and not Harry. (Meat and two veg-- I'm still laughing.)
I think Severus is overthinking the girl thing. Menstruation is a long way off. He'll be an old hand by then. Fun chapter.
Chapter 16
Somehow,I get the feeling the author has lived this part of the pregnancy problem. It's well written and really poignant how they keep missing each other.
That was just sweet that Harry came home to show him that. Ilove Severus' lack of speech, but that Harry can still feel what his partner can't express.
Chapter 17
J, I loved the near poetic quality of Severus' grousing about the entire pregnancy experience at the beginning of the chapter. I think the poor man has it line, verse and chapter.
'terrifying mood swings' that about describes it from a man's perspective... From a woman's too.
Minerva's speech might have been more effective if we could have seen some of Severus' reactions to it, even if it was his internal monologue on the matter. I can't imagine he woud have much of an outward reaction to her story.
I did like Harry's little soliloquy to the girls.