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for I'll Be Home For Christmas

by Jilliane

person sanda
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapters
person kunitsu
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow what updates. I never expected Severus to act that way. I hope everything will go fine for them. Update again soon
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
See, now I'm worried. Sev isn't happy about the baby? WHY NOT?! Update you evil EVIl woman! Wah!
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter! (3). Adored Sev's reaction! I could just see him spluttering away, and Harry's "You're not having a stroke, are you?" made me laugh out loud! Also loved that it was Sev who called Harry on his foolishness on going off on a mission, knowing he was pregnant! My dear, I eagerly look forward to the next installment!
person shadygrl
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! So very cute! Severus is so cranky, and Harry so unsure and hopeful about his "gift". Let's hope it all goes well!
person sanda
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story
person kunitsu
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my I thought it was Harry that was waiting at home and not Severus. I was deliberating on who it was but then I decided it was Harry and I was wrong but oh well. What a nice surprise I wonder how Severus will react to this one

Update soon
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww! I'm so glad this had another chapter added to it. Is there going to be more? I'd like to see Sev's reactions to Harry's pregnancy. Please?
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh please please please please wite sev's reaction after the shock wears off XD I loved your choice of words when describing his expression it was so funny
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOH! Cliffhanger! I hope there's more. We can't leave Harry hanging like that!