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Awww, poor Sev! I really like that you've taken what we know of Severus from the novels (eg his love for Lily) and made his reactions to Harry link into that. A lovely chapter!

Brilliant. I thought until the very end it was Harry who had wrapped his "gift."

this is the most interesting and best chapter you have here. I've never seen someone take that approach with Lily. I really enjoyed this chapter. I also feel bad for them now they must face the wrath of molly weasley for vanishing from dinner XD

Oh, I love this to pieces! So cute and angsty and sweet and I'd pay money to see the apology they're going to have to come up with for Molly. LOL

Holy f*cktards! that was genius.. I thought it was Harry being al dramaqueen but it was Sev? <3 kyaaa

As I can see from your first chapter, this chapter is dedicated to Sweet puppy. Well, miss bigshot amazing story writer (assuming you're a girl), I love how you read other people's stories, notice that your friend "sweet puppy" has already reviewed and immediately tag along with whatever it is that she/he has said. I absolutely ADORE how you go around calling people racist without even checking to see if you are making any sense... OR if you have gotten your facts straight. Do you enjoy tagging onto whatever it is that your friend says and revel in teaming up with her to put an innocent writer down? Calling her racist? Not only that, you say you will discontinue reading it as an excuse to not visit again. You immediately assume she's an ignorant fool and not even give her a chance to explain herself. Wow, people like you make me weep. You immediately assume the worst and look for the worst in people, don't you? ;) shame shame!

That aside, I'll review your story so that I'm not making a complete ass out of myself. (Really, I don't mind because i.m.o, it is totally worth it. Bunnyboiler did nothing wrong and didn't deserve any of the crap you wrote.) I would have preferred emailing you privately but your email has hidden itself away! oh boo hoo!

So where was i? Oh yes, your story! I'll put aside your asshole-like assumptions and review it honestly.
It's no gem and honestly, it's something we've all seen before but I suppose it makes a decent holiday gift of fluff. I remember reading it a few days back and immediately lost interest after the first two chapters. It's decent grammar but you really don't need all the italics. Your readers are intelligent enough to figure out where the emphases are. If it's just your preference, I guess it doesn't matter to you what flamers such as I think.

if you're bothered enough to reply, don't bother. I've lost the pw to this email account. Just go check out "A sins of a father" and see bunny's reasoning. you can at least give the lady a chance. anyway, toodaloo- have a nice day!

awwwww poor harry!! stupid sev!! *smacks him upside the head* he should realize he loves harry more then he love lily... and if he doesn't he's a prick for being with harry... awww... a child's all harry wants... >_< stupid sev, smarten up! *smacks him again in frustration* ... sorry. *hands sev back to jilliane a little bruised*

Oh bloody hell, I hope Severus does something before Harry aborts the baby. I am still confused as to why Severus is acting that way.

Update again soon

OH!! I feel so bad for Harry! I hope Snape will make it all better. Can't wait for the next chapter =)

Oh, you are TRULY evil! We still don't know what Sev's problem is with Harry being pregnant, and now he's talking about aborting it?! You'd better update soon, or I may hunt you down and chuffin' murder you!