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for A Potion Named Desire

by Lomonaaeren

person js
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. :)
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sounds interesting! I can't wait to see more of it!
person pywacket
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to see where this goes
person Roozette
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh... I LOVE the way you are characterizing the main players. Draco is still insecure in areas, but too f'ing proud to ever crumble or concede defeat. The fact that he worked his way up from the very depths of his own personal Hell speaks very highly of his character, and excited me at the direction this story can take. Harry becoming comfortable with himself is marvelous! Often, people refuse to acknowedge he is capable of self-possession without making him too much of a Slytherin (read: too OOC). And Hermione... Oh, I just want to hug her.

Excellent start. I look forward to all future posting :)

Kisses!
Roo

PS: Thanks for answering my question! New question... you said magic was used to create the individual segments of the potion. If this potion relies on emotions the antithesis of hatred (ie: love, lust, happiness, glee), will Draco need Harry's help to ultimately complete segments of it?
person graballz
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG Another story from YOU!!!! A WIP!!! YAY!! (That just doesn't seem like a long enough word to sufficiently express the pure excitement and happiness that accompanies your author name on a new story!)

Question: In the Summary, you say that "Draco...finds himself falling into a surprisingly intellectual companionship with both Hermione and Ron" but I think you meant "Harry", right? Since Ron's dead? Saw that and thought I'd mention it.

Also...I've read enough of your stories now to know that we're not going to find out about that potion that Harry takes until...MUCH later. The final chapter of the third installment, perhaps? *smirk* Just kidding. Well, okay, so we know that it suppresses the parts of himself that he loathes the most. But of course, you don't TELL us what those parts are...so what are they? LOL Or when are we going to find out?

Can't WAIT for Draco's reaction to the owl!!! We already know he's going to agree to help, but I can't wait! *happy dance* I mean, I'm sorry for Hermione and I can totally relate to how she's feeling. Been there. Only...instead of a potion to pull me out of my depression, it was Harry and Draco (being together)! LOL

Thank you for this! NEED CHAPTER TWO NOW!!!! Can I just say...I love you? (oh, and Merry Christmas!)
person Roozette
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Hey!

Nicely set up storyline. I look forward to reading more in this series :) One question... who established the potion for Harry to begin with? Couldn't he return to them for another, modified version? Either way, glad you will be continuing this... it has limitless potential! Happy Holidays!

Kisses!
Roo
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its interesting!
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
always glad to see a new one by you. Will of course watch for updates, this promises to be very interesting indeed.