rate_review Reviews

Draco's loathed aspect was interesting! I have to say that your pacing of this story is pretty much perfect. I'm really glad I decided to start reading this.

Ok...So yeah I'm just like Harry. I understand next to nothing about potions. Hahahaha! But I got the basic concept of what was going on. I hat that Harry feels that he cannot be close to people. what exactly did he DO to Ginny? Update soon!

Oh my dear, I apologize for any confusion. I was simply curious on why Draco didn't simply charge Harry the amount if Harry wanted the potion. That is all.

I'm madly in love with this story.
Really.
I hate how a lot of HP/DM stories are so cliche, and yours has that something different, the something that makes it good as opposed to "Yay, read this somewhere before. I'm bored."

thank you :)

It sounds like Diggory has something against Cordelia Nott so that she would help him. Or maybe his plans are not going in the direction that Cordelia first believed. when she first started supporting him.

Still, a great story. You sure come out with chapters alot. You must be a writing demon. Really appreciate it!!

Great job.

You know, I enjoy your stories immensley, and you have become someone I respect for your quick turnout on your multiple stories. You have a keen mind, my dear, and it is an excellent thing to see how you weave assorted plots together. Your hand at explaining and expanding on subterfuge within your stories has me giddy. It's the complexity, I think that has me so captivated.

However, there are times when I've noticed that simple solutions are never taken, or explained away. For example, in this story, why does Draco not just ask for 20,000+ for Potter and be done with it? Certainly Potter has the funds, and would it not serve Draco's ego to hand in full the amount of money he needs from his creditors?

A simple concern, but one I think undermines your story to an unsettling degree.

-A friend.

Well hopefully Draco is thinking correctly! If he and I are thinking the same thing then I may have guessed close. Poor Harry always the tool never the gardener. Good chapter.

I love this story!! I really like how Draco and Harry are acting with one another and I think this Diggory guy will come again xD I hope you will update soon! I'm waiting for it.

Ch. 7 It's good to see someone putting the screws to Malfoy for a change although he managed to achieve some kind of victory in the end. Makes me happy.

If Draco wanted to see what Harry's like without his potion, I hope he got his answer. He's just lucky that explosion didn't singe off his eyebrows. Maybe next time the Slytherin git will remind him to take it. >;D

So....we have been given more insight as to what Harry hates about himself. I'm slow so forgive me if I don't get it until you tell us but is it his emotions? Or more like his lack of control over them? I felt so bad for Hermione. Poor thing...and Draco with that whole touching thing..a little creepy but also sad. You could tell he was envious. Good chapter!