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This is great

You kill Ron...i'm still in shock....O-O
The other thing about his first chapter is "the potion" ....what is it, and why is Harry taking it?
Lets find out in the next chapters

Mmmm, i'm seeing a problem with any kind of relationship that aharry and Draco migth develop in the future...Draco is gona cheat on Harry with the potion! XD
after all he sayid himslef at the end of the chapter.
I still don't know what is the objetivenof the potion for Harry. Here he said he was a criminal if he didn't take it but....who knows....

Is so weird reading a Harry who knows so much about potions...
About the potion itself, i agree with Hermione, that is a very potentialy life changing potion...i can see very well the repercutions it will bring to the word,and thd...forces, people....who will try to get their hands on it...

I'm stupid, because i still don't undersatnd what the potion do for Harry....
He is now relaxed because he took it, but didn't Draco though of somethin in the loo like: keep him without it?....lets see....

I don't like that Diggori, and that is everything i will say for now.

I really, really enjoyed this piece. In fact, I'm beginning to realize that I pretty much love your writing in general.

I only have one... thought. In Hermione's urging to Harry that he must tell Draco, that it really wasn't that bad... you may not intend to, but to say things like that minimizes the act of sexual assault or rape. He should feel regret. He should be wary. All people should be wary of themselves when they lose control and wish to perform an act of violence against another person. It doesn't matter if Ginny was "teasing" Harry, or if Harry was drunk - to sexually assault someone has little do with lust and a lot to do with power and control. He didn't commit the act and that should be praised but it shouldn't be trivialized either. A person must accept, correct, and carry on but see it for what it is, not minimize it and rationalize it. Rape culture is pervasive. Even if this takes fiction too literally, you write with such a good eye that I only hope to bring awareness.

This is interesting! You can really see the shapes the people take. You write them as reals persons. Harry seems so Harry, with his fear of hurting anyone and being disgusted of his emotions that nearly hurt Ginny. And Draco... I can't wait to see how he manages to lure Harry into his bed and into his life! :D
You also have an interesting plot working in the backround, with Cassandra and Diggory (hope I got the names right). I'm all tingly and giddy with the prospect of finding out how everything links together and how you'll reveal it all :D
Awesome job, and I hope you keep doing it!

I barely want to take the time to write a review for this. I want to get to the second part of it. This story's awsome and I don't mind all the potions conversation at all. It's really interesting and it's actually fun to hear the theories and ideas. Sorry this isn't longer, but I really want to get to the second part.

write more this fic is really good one of the best in a while.. oh please dont leave it here... would saying you are the best writer in the universe help ( srry stephen king)