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February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hooray, another chapter!
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-4: In view of the miserable futures for these two, it is a distinct "sadness" Severus' wand didn't light up (oh, that sounds a bit risque, doesn't it?), but only if he would have left the Death Eaters and that appeared unlikely.
A sliver of what Snape probably liked best in his future bedroom is evident in his attempts at commanding Lily, but his true love for her allows him to back off - some. Would they have come to blows later if their lives had intertwined?
These two are very much a hot item the way you write them - they have warmth and caring and love allied to their mutual easy arousals (ah, youth!) Lily is joyous not to be pregnant and as a very young female presented with a man who is under the thumb of dark forces, one would have to side with her relief. It is Snape who is saddened, but again, looking into the future any child of his would have wound up like Draco, a hostage to his father's behavior. We know that didn't turn out well for Lucius. So again, really, a relief.
Lovely story, excellent writing.
A sliver of what Snape probably liked best in his future bedroom is evident in his attempts at commanding Lily, but his true love for her allows him to back off - some. Would they have come to blows later if their lives had intertwined?
These two are very much a hot item the way you write them - they have warmth and caring and love allied to their mutual easy arousals (ah, youth!) Lily is joyous not to be pregnant and as a very young female presented with a man who is under the thumb of dark forces, one would have to side with her relief. It is Snape who is saddened, but again, looking into the future any child of his would have wound up like Draco, a hostage to his father's behavior. We know that didn't turn out well for Lucius. So again, really, a relief.
Lovely story, excellent writing.
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is, far and above, my favorite SS/LE fic ever. My only point of contention being your use of the word "congested." It calls to mind the state of my sinuses. Personal issues aside, what a great fic!
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is great!
keep going. It has so much potential
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keep going. It has so much potential
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic so much! Plz continue writing it. As you said yourself, it's much better than any SS/HG fic.
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well you may not think it is a popular fan fic but I am in love with it. And I can't wait for more. At lest I hope there is more.
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so she wasn't pregnant then... I'm sure Sev has some tricks up his sleeve along with the cigarettes though.
That Room of Requirement comes in so handy. I'm with you on this pairing being preferable to SS/HG, which I tend to avoid. Please don't be disheartened!
That Room of Requirement comes in so handy. I'm with you on this pairing being preferable to SS/HG, which I tend to avoid. Please don't be disheartened!
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fancy Imperiusing Madam Pince! What a little monkey!
This is a wonderfully darkly obsessive Severus; very much as I imagine him as a teenager. What on earth is Lily going to do?
Can't wait to find out how the test comes up.
This is a wonderfully darkly obsessive Severus; very much as I imagine him as a teenager. What on earth is Lily going to do?
Can't wait to find out how the test comes up.
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yayayayayay. I love this so much, probably one of my most favorites EVER. I'm so glad you wrote more ^_^
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha, yes, that was definitely the kind of 'more' I was after. Gorgeous. I think a stalkerish teenage Snape is very ic, control freak and all. His evil plan to get Lily pregnant is very interesting! I can't imagine how this is going to turn out now. Hope you can update soon.