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for Beauty and Sadness

by InkStainedWretch

schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, excellent, the first Dark Marks. Very visceral, sensual writing as well; you could be there with the Death Eaters. Bellatrix's character is mad as a box of frogs straight away, and scary with it. I'm guessing Lily might not like Severus' new arm adornment.
person Ashley Davies
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It' me again.............no I'm not a staker!...........UPDATE!!!!
person Mrs. J
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This is the first time I've ever felt like I had to review for a story! I loe this sooooooooooo much :)
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have been a little lax about reviewing lately--sorry. Your plot and dialog are so realistic. I liked the little confrontation with James. He IS arrogant. Please, please, please update soon!
person Ashley Davies
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love you! OMG I can't believe you updated so quick! That chapter was amazing! I love how protective Severus is over Lily, it's sooo cute! But he better watch his ass because if pregnant hormonal Lily finds out that he lied to her...... 0_0

PLEASE UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!! (...please)
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alarm bells! What's Lily's 'odd' feeling? And gathering down by the Whomping Willow can't be good. Does James have a plan?

Oh dear, I'm excessively anxious now. What I liked about the sex scene was the way you kept having Sev bite back the words and use his fingers to do the talking - that was very effective (and sexy). Great work, as ever.
person Ashley Davies
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing!
person snaperape
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY snape got what he wants. I can't wait to see how this goes
person Chestnut
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I simply love this story! It is so well written and I love the pairing. Keep up the wonderful work, I cannot wait for the next chapter.
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! What on earth is going to happen now?

Gripped by this story, and I can't wait for them to enjoy the hospitality of Lucius Malfoy either.

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