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for Beauty and Sadness

by InkStainedWretch

person Ann10155
schedule January 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really love this. I don't know when this was published, but I do hope you continue it. I stopped somewhere around chapter 7/8. So, I'll see, hmm? :)
person hfreak
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful fic!
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Severus, going to visit baby Harry, and Lily having no idea why, sob, though *whispers* he kind of deserved it. Unscrupulous, but in such a sexy way. Beautiful bittersweet tale - so have you 'done' Snape/Lily now, or do you have more possibilities for them as a pairing?
person S&A
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"I got a chill." Jeez. And so it begins. I was thinking some sort of concealment charm, but when you think about it, the shirt and lying about his discomfort seems a bit more deceptive and manipulative.

Malfoy is a real jerk--and "pervert" seems to follow naturally. I, personally, am amazed that Lily didn't have something to say to them--I'm interested to see if there is a rationale offered, or if she is just trying to smooth things over with Severus, and he is trying to do the same, what with the impending wedding and all.
person G
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woa...awesome fic! U still updating, or is it tossed out?

*crosses fingers for another chapter*
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good!
person Ashley Davies
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome PLEASE continue!!
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful lavish sumptuousness at the Malfoy Manor, and wouldn't you just know that the hosts would have terrible manners! I like it that people smoke in your stories - from canon, you'd think only Mundungus Fletcher had any of the human vices at all. How come Harry doesn't have the near-universal rite-of-passage of coughing and spluttering behind the bike (or broomstick, I suppose) sheds? Naughty Lucius with his lascivious mind games - that was rather hot.

From the Britpick p.o.v. I find absolutely nothing out of place here. Terrific chapter!
person Ashley Davies
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!Love it :)