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for Severus Scrooged

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule December 15, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Loved this! 

schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I discovered your stories recently and have to say I love them all whether they are my couple or not.

Your writing is coherent (some are not), has good grammar (also missing in many), and even the spelling isn't bad.
That all adds to the story as far as I'm concerned.
There are too many stories out there that seem to be missing chapters or something. The stories don't flow and it's irritating to me to try to figure out what's going on.
Thanks for writing. Please continue with any coupling you like. I'll read.
person smmz79
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this one shot... sooo cute... and isn't severus cute when he is trying to be noble.... poor thing... i laughed so hard at siruis' way to transport severus that was great and definitely my fave!!!!!! loved it
person ~*~TashaRose~*~
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how I missed this story. I could have sworn that I read all of yours. This was a really neat one shot. Loved the "ghosts" part of it and it's parallel to a familiar and favorite Christmas tale. {Smiles} I love so many of your stories, and I'm sure I've told you that many times over at GE. I actually printed up the list of what you had here to compare it to what I saved on my hard drive between AFF and GE posts. I couldn't believe how many were missing ... though most of them were later on in the year of 2008 when I was just watching for your stories at GE. I'm definitely going to have to keep checking both sites now. I don't want to miss a single one of yours. I like your LM/HG, SS/HG, DM/HG, heck even the RL/HG has been good too and that isn't one of my regular pairings. Thank you for sharing your talent with us readers. If you want to contact me you can do it through GE's contact person feature, I am TashaRose.
person Muffy
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic take on A Christmas Carol. Thanks!
person Anon
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a brilliant interpretation of 'A Christmas Carol', wonderfully Potterized and had me hooked from woah to go. :) What a bittersweet insight into his past and the future that might have been. I love who you chose to be his ghosts too. Well done!!!
person nonentity
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the different methods each ghost used to take Severus to and from his visions. :-)
person RowaineS
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cute, cute, cute!
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
noooo SG what are you doing? why Luci? *sobs* i still loved it...you redeemed yourself with Draco lol fabulous as usual!
person Utopia
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Why haven