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for Barking Dogs Do Not Bite

by ZooArmy

schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I find it horribly unbelievable that a woman would simply stick her breast out at the beginning of a conversation. It may be natural to breastfeed but it's not a sideshow, she would've been more discrete than that if she needed to feed her child at that moment. And nothing showed enough urgency as to why couldn't have done it before or after talking to Harry, the baby wasn't even crying. It bugged me to the point I could hardly get through the rest of the chapter.
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
bah its about time for an update....lets hurry with the next one ya? lol
person Raeysama
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. I wait patiently for chapter 14.
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating. Where you left off before was cruel! But this chapter satisfied me. I can't wait to see what happens.
person HawkTear
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really want to know whats gonna happend next. Really need to know.
It's a loveley story and very good writing. :) Keep up the good work!
person Lullaby to Rita
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Weee, I read all this today! I really like this fic, even if Draco and Harry are a bit too, how can I say... Draco is too submissive and Harry the dominant male. But I'm loving it anyway! Can't wait to find out about harry's hobby... something about guilt process?
person char_marcus
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooh i love this story can't wait for the next chapter or them gettin down to the nitty gritty hehe keep up the good work :)
person cravedom
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This weekend while going for a walk I saw a young men with dark hair acompanied by a very large boxer, of course your story came to mind and a day later I find a new chapter. See? Harry is not the only one with superpowers.

Anyhow that is what I meant when I mentioned art for your story (not that I have psychic powers)but that the things you describe in your story leave picture-like images in my head and it seems to me that it would be such an awsome graphic novel. It could be like The Punisher but with boy love. Yumm


The boys seem so young to have endured so much, that may show my age but when you mentioned that Harry was 21 my first thought was that he should be in college.


Harry must think Draco is an idiot, if he was not going to tell him the truth he should have come up with a better story.
person harrydracoluvr
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed your story. I love how u like keeping us in suspense and coming back for more. I just hope you are able to update often.
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok so what exactly is harry's second job?