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Harry's big secret is so mundane. ^^ hehehehe
And here I was expecting something fantastic and magical. lol
Although I must say, I look forward to seeing Harry in a cage fight. Awesome chapter. It was only the build up that made it seem completely out of left field with its plausible normality. Keep up the great work!

so like Fight Club huh? well i never thought that, well i thought he might be fighting but i didn't expect something like that. i want to see what else happens.

Fantastic job. I have just started reading this fic and finished the latest chapter and I must say, this is an amazing piece of fanfiction. Please continue to update this story when you find the time to do so.

It's called catharsis - I am glad you explained it - I am now looking forward to how you deal with it - More chapters please.

Well damn I was wrong. I really thought Harry was a vigilante. This is a much cuter explanation and one with less consequences since it would just be a matter of stopping. Now we just need to figure out a way for Harry to release extra anger and energy. Hmmm; what do do, what do do...?

Oh, you did not tell us his stage name! I guess is something to do with dog... Why is he so strong? Is it part of his magic or just the anger? Do the other fighters wear leather too? Just the pants, no shirt... MMM. Darn it now I have dirty Ultimate Fighter images in my head!

I understand why you had to stop, the chapter would have been wasy too long if you told the whole story. At least we have a promise from Draco not to run, not that he can be really trusted to keep it but it is something.

At this point however Harry is the one that worries me, it would be espected that Draco wont like him risking his life being a vigilante or and will ask him to stop. Should that happen will Harry agree or does he still need to go out and beat bad guys on a regular basis? If he does have this need can Draco handle it?

Sorry about your test but on the bright side it may not matter since the marked colapsed and you would not find a job afer graduation anyhow :) At least that is my sons excuse for not studying...

mmm yomust have just forgotten to post the rest of the chapter riiiiight? lol cant wait for the next one though!

Soooo need chapter 16!!! What else does he tell Draco?

Glad to see they are going to get everything said and out there. They had me wishing I could reach in there and bash their heads together. He said he got bad when Draco disappeared. He has him now, so is he going to give up on his "night work"?

It's a good story. But just how many times will Draco change his mind, and just how long will Harry keep his secrets before they grow a brain between the two of them and figure it out already? They need to move forward soon. At least a little bit. It's getting too repetitive, this failing to ask important questions and running away instead business. Still, I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing your talent with fanfictiondom. One more question: Is English a second language for you? You have good vocabulary, spelling, punctuation and so on, but occasionally your syntax is odd. It reminds me of my High School French class and the oddness of the grammar and word order in some cases. What is your native language?