rate_review Reviews

Years too long without an update. You cannot say you haven't had access to a computer in more than 5 years

is this story dead?

now i would like to see this story go on, the only real problem i see is if this is a magic fic then harry would need to take pet with him to school.

Good so far, although the author notes should go at the beginning/end of a chapter and not as a chapter itself... keep it up!

Well this sounds like this might could make a pretty good story. I look forward to seeing when you get your computer fixed and can post those next 3 chapters. if you get the chance give me a heads up they have my e-mail wrong it is the same as my screen name at hotmail.

still waiting for more because i really like direction this story is going

Great start mate, I like how she handled Petunia, could you tell me what age Harry is? I like the control Harry had over Pet.

PLEASE update soon.

Are u thinking that fanfic is some diary? o_O

Is there a way that we can REPORT this story as abuse?

For goodness sakes. You've got a 4 chaptered story on here, but only one of those chapters is an actual story! Don't update just to tell us about the latest little thing that goes through your mind, that's what livejournal is for. Basic rule, it's easy to follow, each 'chapter' should be an actual chapter, not just a comment about, 'Oh, I might do this'. If you feel you must tell people what you're thinking, make it a footnote to an actual chapter!

I'm sorry to be bitchy, but it's a real pain when you go to read a 'new' chapter, and it's something completely inconsequential.