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for A Wizard's Debt

by Utopia

person Anon
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You wrote her so well, I almost feel bad for Pansy ... but she's still b*tch, lol!

Love the description of Sev in his wedding attire. The image you created was quite swoon worthy. Looking forward to your next update :)
person luvhp
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, finally the wedding!!!
And yes, do not piss off a pregnant witch! LOL
Okay, so uh, hurry up and get to the wedding NIGHT!!!!
(Not anxious at all!)
: )
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More more more more more. This is wonderful!
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay they're married! So next chapter's the wedding night right? lol Just kidding. That was a great update, I can't wait for more!
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story up to this part...it's completely out of synch with the rest of the story. But then, thats my opinion. Love the story thus far otherwise.

Red
person Jesse
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sorry but Michael??? That is horrible!! Severus and Michael?! That doesn't work at all in my head! But, I do so much enjoy your stories so I will let it pass!! ;) Apart from that everything is perfect!!
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great. I can't wait to read more soon.
person jraskin
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, so sweet,I loved this chapter. Please, please write more, and update soon!!
person Anon
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was sweet. Very nice work :)

Can hardly wait for the wedding night!
person Justkiwi
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You write beautifully though your A/Ns are a bit mental from time to time ;) Keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming