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hey there!
i read two very interesting chapters. i love your story and the characters in it - they are alive, funny... you draw a round picture of them!
my language abilities are not as good as i would like them, but if you can order things in german, you have to be quite good, because german is one of the most difficult languages to lern!
bis bald!
love, vic

... I love you.

:)

OMG! You had be busting up here at work after reading your 'turkey-baster' comment, and NO Thank you! I'd much rather do it the old fashioned way! :) I'm sure we can find a way around the whole ministry mess ;)

Ah, poor Wedding night. Didn't sound very seductive and angsty, but with time running out I guess it had to be done. Lucius is too funny.
On to the honeymoon!!!!

Excellent. I can't wait to read more soon.

Yum yum.......Severus in a small towel. How considerate he's being too. Hangover cures and contraceptive potions and ones to help eliminate "first time pains". Hmmmmm. You sure he's not Lupin polyjuiced? No no no! Obviously Hermione is now seeing why his beloved Slytherins adored him so. And how could he eat a full English after imbibing alcohol and the excitement of his wedding? I mean the day after the night before....well all I could stomach would be two sausages, three rashers of bacon, two eggs, some beans,tomatoes, mushrooms, tattie scones, fried bread, toast and butter.....oh and a river of Yorkshire tea......but hold the black pudding. But I mean I couldn't eat a FULL English breakfast. I mean that's for really greedy pigs, or Sev or my husband who could eat it curried. Greedy bugger. So what are they going to encounter at the Bermuda Triangle? They could take Lucius along to complete the triangle or am I thinking of a menage a trois? By the way, my eldest daughter was the "morning after errand girl" for all her friends and it seemed to cost US a small fortune on her mobile phone. Don't ask. Everything is going along champion-ly. Well done. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx

ohh morning after severus... i am reading this at work, my boss keeps asking why i'm drooling. He just doesnt get it. oh well. Great story, i like the diffrent perspectives.

ok, this is pretty good, i hope you finish this one...i hope you post more soon..cant wait to read more.

the canon of mozart? who the hell did make these cds of yours?
pachelbel wrote this canon about 100 years before mozart was born and they have written in very different styles - mozart was vienna classic and pachelbel baroque
and the very, very biggest difference is: pachelbel was a german composer and mozart an austrian one
but i do totally agree, i can't hear the wedding march (no difference between mendelsson or wagner) any more... there are so many beautiful songs to walk down the aisle...

now to the cap: i'm sorry for hermione, that her first time did hurt so much and i'm rather glad mine didn`t (thx to ballett and sport *gg*)
love to read more - and please forgive me my mistakes in spelling or grammar - my mothertounge is german, not english...
greets, vic

Hi Honey.....I'm back. Did you miss me??? No????? Fair enough. But the Algarve was lovely. Superb two or three chapters I've just read culminating into a very realistic and credible first time consummation. Well done. Wouldn't have minded Lucius helping out with the corset scene though.......... or the deflowering! Sorry. Saw Jason Isaacs at the end of the BAFTAs last night. And as for Pachelbel. My daughter went down the aisle to that three years ago when she got married at Coniston in Cumbria. Gorgeous piece of music. Much better than "Here comes the bride.....infinity inches wide". Hopefully when they are relaxed and on holiday things will go a little bit smoother. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxxx. PS. We went away for just a bloody week and when we returned both t'internet and Sky were f@$%ed!