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wow that was awsome i love it .. please please more .. later for now

angel

Hi Utopiaa,
woaw...This is a very promising beginning to a great story.I loved the idea of writing the different chapters in the p.o.v. from the persons involved.As I am an addicted fan of our sour and snarky potion master I secretely hope that you will not make him too ooc.I think he can be very caring and maybe even romantic,but I think that he is however very nasty and somerimes can be a real bastard.
I suppose that the substitute ingredient was freshly collected virgin blood.I am right,am I?
Well I cannot wait to read on and see in which direction this story will go.I guess Severus will want her to marry him,because she sacrificed her verginity to him,or mabe she would even have problems of finding a proper suitable husband as she isn

I absolutely adore and am addicted to MLCs. That being said, I'm looking forward to your take on the Marriage Law. I would consider chapter 7 an evil cliffie!!!

I am already hooked,even though virgin blood was clear from the 1st chapter, your style is so smooth and flowing,I hope you'd update soon.

great start!
can't wait for more.

Secret ingredient? i would say virgin blood.

I like it. Please update soon.

This is an entertaining little story. Easy to read too. Can't wait for more.

nice, continue =)

It's good so far, I like it, please update soon.

Oh my goodness! How suspenseful! Tell me more tell me more more more more! Please?