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for A Wizard's Debt

by Utopia

schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really continue to enjoy this story. I had to laugh when Hermione got that picture of the you-know-what. I've been on many dating sites and gotten more than enough of those so I know where she's comming from.

Also, I don't know if this will settle anything but here goes. I was reading a text on human sexuality the other day and according to it, virginity is just the lack of having expierenced intercourse. There are actually quite a few females that are born without a hymen at all. In the old days, that could literally be quite a fatal flaws. Many old societies would execute any women they found lacking them. Hope that helps.
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a bit unexpected...i thought that draco wanted pansy by the insinuation of the look that they shared. you had two of the same chapters posted which i am sure someone else has already mentioned by now...i am looking forward to seeing when hermione and severus marry...
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i love this story!! and draco and oliver??? i never thought! this is great! update soon!
person Delfin
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh yes! weddng night! =)

great chappies :P
person Miss Tanit
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update and no I do not read minds but shush, don
person Damiana
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hm. The M/M pairing is a surprising one... I won't say anymore in case some people read the reviews first.

Unexpected. :D
person Miss Tanit
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Secret ingredient: the blood of a virgin's maidenhead
Well I think she can wear white on her wedding day as she has never know a mans embrace or passion as the saying goes.
As to why a quill and not Neville...I believe the presence of a male in the collection would 'taint' the blood in some form and she was not willing to take the chance of a negative side effect now was she.

Love the story, please update regularly and as soon as possible.
person Damiana
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Secret ingredient: Virginal blood...from the hymen's rupture.

Unicorns are caught because they will only approach virgins after all.

Interesting concept up to now. I am eager to read more. :D
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great start, i look forward to reading more...