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by Utopia

person Carine
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
H Utopia,
congratualations for this great slash scene.I do not like slash especially,but I must admitt that you made it sound very romantic and erotical.You could sent that Oliver is really in love with Draco.But what will happen when Lucius will learn about their marriage?I love your story so much and I cannot wait to see what will happen between Hermione and Snape.(((H))) Sureves Epans
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great update to a great story, I look forward to read more!!!
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HEY! Thats not fair! Where is the rest you naughty tease?
person chyara
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please do keep updating and i'd be fine with a wedding night chapter.
person MrsDeLay
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this story, i want to see where you take it for our favorite pairing. I like the twist with oliver and draco, very sexy.. write to your hearts content.

Happy Holidays!
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
::claps:: Write a wedding night!! LOL Sorry, I'm tring not to giggle too loudly as my kiddo is sleeping. This is a great story. Keep up the excelent work.
And on a more personal note... i want to marry a certain snarky slytherin while wearing jammies!
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cute so far
person Damiana
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The unicorn thing...Well that's what the mythology surrounding unicorns suggests. That the best way to capture a unicorn is to have a young (beautiful?) maiden sit seemingly alone and that any passing unicorn will be attracted or at least willing to approach. That's the medieval opinion of it in any case...
I often wonder if Wikipedia is really a friend but it has some interesting stuff...http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Unicorn

Chapter 8

Oh...a harsh response for Ron! hehehe I never really saw them as a good couple. Then again, he isn't exactly an intellectual equal.
I like Hermione's reasoned response to Draco as well.

Hmm...I wonder how you'll get Severus and Hermione together...who's idea will it be?
person chyara
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Looking forward to more chapter goodness!
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No need to write the wedding night, the lubricant says it all. I loved all Hermiones little piles for her proposals. Quite amusing. I can't believe those photos, too funny. How would one write a polite refusal note after seeing those?

Dear (insert name here),

I sincerely thank you for your proposal of marriage but I must decline. I require my mate to be of atleast 9 inches and the ruler you included in your photo clearly tells me that you are otherwise. May I also suggest a visit to your healer as those spots look serious.

Good luck for the future,

Hermione Granger.