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I know you must have at least six other fics going, but I really wish you had finished this one, it's one of my favorites.

I LOVE IT! SNAPE-A-DOODLE is receiving aid from Neville! That is too perfect. *dances around* I like the different voices technique that you are using. It is interesting and difficult to pull off!

Chap. 4

Do Americans and Brits switch up "S's" and "Z's" often? e.g. Sterilized(Am), and you have "sterilised." That is weird if you take away places where "Z" is. "Z" is an underappreciated letter. It could be damaged for all time because of this.

It is underappreciated, LIKE SEVERUS SNAPE! He needs love! SO DOES LOONY LUPEY LUPIN!

I love the "You Spelt My Name Wrong" pile. No quicker way to turn anyone off than doing that in a letter. I love Draco. I want to give him hugs.

I have two words following the previous six...*happy dance*

I like it. Please update soon.

Hi there. I just sat and read this story today and wow! I can't believe you didn't finish it! It's fun, funny, got a good level of angst, and is filled with hope right up until the wedding night. Then they have that awful night, a worse morning and .... darn! That was really good. Thank you for what you wrote and shared. HG4eva

I realize it's been a while since you added to this story, but I have always liked it and even have re-read it several times; it's a favorite of mine. Just a couple of things, since your Beta was down for the count?: Feinting/fainting; they're-there-their issues (always hated multiple pronouns in english class) and the lack of a conclusion! If you ever decide to pick this one up, you'll have at least one eager reader!

Okay young Lady, I've waited long enough for the next chappie.
I'ts not fair of you to leave us poor readers hanging in suspenders (sorry I mean Suspense!)

I love your work and NEED TO HAVE MORE!!!

Poke your muse with a banana if you have to I don't care, but PLEASE update soon?

Loads of Blessings

Amethystique xx

P.S Have you Graduated Yet?

Dearest Utopia!!!
I enjoy your story...nah... I love it... I'm seriously addicted!
I really like your style of writting, especially changes in point of view.
Severus and Hermione are pictured wonderfully and I think that I wouldn't do this better than you.
After all pleasantries were written there is a time for telling off. Why do I have to wait so long!
I beg you on my knees for next chapters of 'A Wizard's Debt'. If you have problems with beta I offer you my services. I'm not a native English but I;m proficient enough not to have problems with correcting mistakes, passing my ideas and adding some constructive feedback.
Yours Elanori