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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
;) I really love your sense of humor! 'Run, Mum's coming this way!'
Ch 18 - I was a little surprised that HG agreed to spend the night with SS. After all they went from acquaintances to engaged in a matter of an hour or two ... but, once there, I truly appreciated the way you had them proceed so gently and not have HG suddenly turn into Miss Know-It-All-Sex-Kitten.
Ch. 19 - Beginning, same thing ... the gentle exploration and learning about Sev's body, nicely done. Though I do think he should not have covered himself at the 'final moment'. She'd have wanted to see/know the results of her efforts. She's not stupid, she has to technically know that something happens ... I think she'd want to experience the actual 'out come'. [If only for educational purposes.]
Ch 18 - I was a little surprised that HG agreed to spend the night with SS. After all they went from acquaintances to engaged in a matter of an hour or two ... but, once there, I truly appreciated the way you had them proceed so gently and not have HG suddenly turn into Miss Know-It-All-Sex-Kitten.
Ch. 19 - Beginning, same thing ... the gentle exploration and learning about Sev's body, nicely done. Though I do think he should not have covered himself at the 'final moment'. She'd have wanted to see/know the results of her efforts. She's not stupid, she has to technically know that something happens ... I think she'd want to experience the actual 'out come'. [If only for educational purposes.]
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story. You are a really wonderful writer. I hope to see more from this.
:D
-Sage
:D
-Sage
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree, wise men do not upset their wives.....lest they find themselves locked out of the house on a rainy night while their wife holds their boots hostage and he has to sleep in the car.....oh, wait, flashbacks, sorry......you are a busy busy beaver arent you my dear? (hoping the word beaver does not have the same conotations in the UK ;P ) LOve the boys reactions...not a level head ammong them when it comes to Hermione is there? and running in fear of their mother.....I would run from Molly too....wish my boys had some fear of me.....they just laugh....ah well.....so Mione got in a little early morning wand handling did she?**Waggles brows** Im jealous. I appreciate that Severus was well endowed but not lethal....who really wants a man who looks like he's sporting a quidditch bat? **Ouch** Besides, they are wizards....stands to reason they could transfigure it to fit the witchs preference.....all right, this review is going south quickly LOL
Wonderful, dearie, I look forward to more.
XXX
Sg
Wonderful, dearie, I look forward to more.
XXX
Sg
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!!!Please, please update soon!! Remember, wise person say: "Keep readers interested"
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the new chapters, very well done. I like how "normal" you make our beloved couple, no natural sex-God/Godess, but absolutely normal with a will to explore and to learn how to pleassure the other, I like that! I love to read more about Severus's Potions Master friends, so update again soon!!!
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL! This is GREAT!! I'm really loving this fic. Looking forward to your next update.
Keep it up,
Lexy
Keep it up,
Lexy
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update! I loved how Hermione told off her adopted family! It was great! I can't wait to read more! Update again and soon!
Tiffany
Tiffany
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello Flower. Firstly I'm ill. There's some flu bug on MY side of the Pennines and I passed out t'other day. Anyway the computer doesn't seem to be agreeing with me much either and this is the first time I've started to read your story. Nicely done. I like this Sev and how he is looking after her. Could he come and look after me please? I'm only a few miles down the M62 or A676. My hubby's 6'5" too. I love tall men. They just seem to go on forever and ever. And realistically hung.....not like Shergar....God rest him. Got to go. Think I'm going to keel over. But remember....."We were so poor, we worked down't mine 25 hours a day, eight days a week and paid mineowner for't privilege.......LUXURY!!!!!!!!!!" Has Jesus just walked in??????? I think you know where I'm coming from but I'm a bit delusional at the moment. "What's that Alan darling? You HAVE to give me a foot and then full body massage. Okay love....I'm coming." Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxxx.