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I like it. Please update soon.

I like it. Please update soon.

A northern lass meself found t'introduction a reet laugh. Am more from Lancashire tha knows. Bowt 15 miles from Manchester.
A Quaint Market town wi'.....*****waxes lyrical as the hovis theme plays in the background******

*Get's a grip on English again....*

I'm loving this couple. The fact that you're introducing friends from Severus' past who were not death eaters or homicidal megalomaniacs with a superiority complex makes for good reading. I am curoius though, why does Zhi call his wife "My Dragon" I hope it is nothing to so with her disposition!
Blessings to you and your muse
Amethystique xx

Whoooops. Dahling! I think you may have got the wrong end of the wand. I suppose the good news from your point of view is that I'm not a pure-blooded red-roser but only an adopted one. I'm more of a Minerva McGonagall (though not from any posh parts of Edinburgh). But of course now it means that you CAN trust me as everyone knows, us Scots are the most trustworthy people in the world.....well perhaps not Burke and Hare. But these sausage butties....they sound magnifique and Sev would be able to share them with me......a true gourmet. After all who can resist the call of haggis (blech) or the screech of the deep fried Mars Bar. I prefer Bounty bars myself washed down with Malibu a la Nigella. I'm still ill. Have mercy. And it's lovely stories like this that's keeping my spirits up as I wait for the Nurofen to kick in. So you're at Uni in Derby. My daughter's at Edinburgh but she's in Arizona this year and has just rung me asking for bloody money. Bleedin' students. (Paul Calf). Missing you already. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxxx

well my dear i just love your story!!! i really look forward to the following chapters and i do hope that you have LOTS more to come! the way you have patterned the story is very different i am not sure if i like it or not. i can be kinda confusing BUT i do love that you can 'get inside their heads' so to speak. as always i will be waiting to read more! just make sure when you get writing that you take your time and not go to fast that you skip over a 'step' and i have us get lost. (i do hope i have made sense!) :) until next time!

Interesting story. Looking forward to the next parts.

This is an incredible story. I can't wait to read more soon.

Ah well this Severus isn't about to smack certain parts of anyone's anatomy, "wi't belt", but he is a well written character, with more of a past than most in this story. I am really enjoying this story, though I wish there was more of it, you know it's going where you want when your readers' start acting like Oliver and begging "more, please". And for some reason I am now thinking about cardboard boxes and motorways...... and coal lung, how very bizarre. Fia.

Really enjoying this story

Hi Utopia,
wow you were very busy these days.(or I was too lazy!)This morning I had to read 8 chapters!!!
By the way I hope that your exams went well.
As it seems Severus is not behaving his usual self these days.(ok you warned us that he would be a lot ooc.) I think it would be funny if his mother really came back as a ghost to hunt down poor Sevvie if he were nasty to his young wife.This thought is simply hilarious.I cannot wait to read more.(((H)))Sureves Epans