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for A Wizard's Debt

by Utopia

person Citten
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay so i am slightly behind on the times i had to leave for a while and when i finished the chapter and reviewed you had already added a new chapter and so well.... well if luc and cissa do have another baby that will help draco greatly and make everyone happer. :)

sorry side note i dont care for m/m parings but at least your happy. (personally i cant see draco like another male that way-but hey this is your story.)

WRITE MORE-SOON!!!
person Tobi
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww

Sweet Draco.

I am enjoying your story. I just started reading it two days ago. The frequent updates make me a happy girl. :)


schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I loved how Hermione showed Marcia the G-String and thong! That was great! I can't wait to read more. Please update again and soon!

Tiffany
person snapescat
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story. I read a chunk of it at once and now I am following the updates which are very regular - thanks for that. It's unfolding slowly and smoothly and I really like the the way each chapter is a different person's POV. POVs are difficult to write but you are doing this so well. Keep up the good work.
person aliciana
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, Sev had better not be thinking about doing a DB and wearing Hermione's g-strings. That would just be wrong! Feng Shui????......in the words of Jim Royle and every other blue blooded Northern man.....Feng Shite more like. Not necessarily my view you understand, just keeping in character......and to agree with you further......Oliver Mellors (Sean Bean)....yum yum. Listen....I love your story and we've not even hit the Full Monty yet. And I do appreciate your frequent updates as I can only sit at the computer for about 15 minutes at a time before I need my bed again. This bug's a bastard and when I find out who gave it me, they're dead. But it'll probably turn out to be my one year old grandson Harrison and I'll go all soft and mushy as usual. Right.....I'm havering again....I'm getting a vision of Heathcliff Snape and it's getting in the way of reality. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx. PS I'm only on Nurofen, honest.
person Delfin
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im loving the updates, keep em coming!
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Zhi is like a kinder, more genuine Dumbledore. I love the little bits of wisdom, but try not to over use the device. Surely he can talk in more than one-liners.

So, is Sev going to ask for a 'fashion show' now? Tempting though it may be, I think HG should consider Madam Heng's fashions as her trousseau and not to be seen until after the wedding! He can look at her knickers all he wants then.

By-the-way, you did not mention as to whether or not Hermione is getting credit as the designer on the sketches she handed over.
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more.