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for A Wizard's Debt

by Utopia

person anniea
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay utopia do you realize how hard it is to not crack up laughing at that chapter at 3 in the morning in a house full of little children who need thier sleep? really really difficult! but that just means that the chapter was hilarious. please update soon *kisses*
person Karen
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have been enjoying this story. It started off so good! But, now, it has hit a plateau. Make more of Hermione and Severus's wizard's debt and such.
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww poor Malfoy Family. Cant wait for more
person Pumkin
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the chapters keep getting better and better. i can't wait to see what you write next. please update soon. keep up the good work.
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I hope that Narcissa will be able to have an easy pregnancy this time. I think the Ministry was wrong making already married couples go through the no contraceptive part of the new law. I can't wait to read more soon.
person Citten
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay ch 28: yes! severus learned the two best words in the english dictionary! 'yes dear'!
ch 29: well i would like you to show us the doctors appointment and such, but what ever you have planned will be fine!
do update soon i would love to see what you have in store for us! :)
person aliciana
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just caught up with the last three chapters love. Great stuff. And I couldn't agree more. Daddy-long-legs.....scum of the universe. They frolic around silently and then sit on your head. Bastards. They probably gave me this bug. Feeling a little better today and have just booked a holiday to Portugal....that should cheer me up. I'm glad Draco and Oliver are coming together nicely as they do deserve happiness together. I always thought that Oliver was a tasty little Scottish morsel though. Lovely cheeky little smile. And yes I probably am old enough to be his (young) mum. Don't want a toyboy though I'm still looking for a sugar daddy a la Rickman. Ooh and get a load of Cissy and Lucius....but as I've reminded you. I don't want Lucius or Sev in wimmin's clothes. Boxers or Y-fronts will do nicely. Best wishes, Love.....a slightly better and more coherent Ali xxxxx.
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a fun story I really like the way it is going. I have read all the current chapters in one night. I cant wait to read more.
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a fun story I really like the way it is going. I have read all the current chapters in one night. I cant wait to read more.
person snapescat
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the regular updates.Keep up the good work.
I hate daddy long legs too, my cat protects me from them as well as spiders.
This is developing nicely. Not keen on M/M myself but I can skim through those bits.

Looking forward to the wedding.

cheerio