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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. You have a talent for writing, and although you did say this is a one-shot, I hope that you will continue this story.
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a fabulous pwp. I would have to say it is the most believable version of their first time together that I've read. Great, great job. I loved the awkwardness, it was all really good. Bravo! :)
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice oneshot. Keep it up.
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue this story... I think you have talent and you left it open for continuation.
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was really sweet. And hot!