AFF Fiction Portal
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an incredible story. I can't wait to read more soon.
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo why end there????? are a sadist? plz update soon
person jraskin
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!!!!Write more soon,please!!!!
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH PLZ UPDATE PLZ PLZ hahahaha I love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for more since i want to find out who the other mate is
person Jammar
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am so totally in love with your story! PLEASE PLEASE hurry and write more!!!! *sits and rereads and anxiously awaits another new chapter*
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOO. Dang it I would love to read what happens in the next chapter. Plz Update Soon
person Bethany
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story seem interesting but may I suggest getting a beta. Commas cannot take the place of periods. Too many run-on sentences.
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.