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for The Wedding

by gorgeousbowneyes

person sonykit
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi! you asked me to leave you the title of the fic i was looking for. it's called behind the masks. it's an unfinished fic (at least the one i've read) that can be found at http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2539446/1/Behind_the_Masks. i also read your fic. it's interesting and humorous. i love the anxiety that the pair experiences prior to all the fluff brought by the wedding. draco being snappy is really so cute. i hope you find it in you to continue it. ;)
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE update!!!
person qwerty
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
take the time you need
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you mentioned later chapters....but 2 months lsater there is no such luck. is this a Work In Progress or is it abandoned?
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So Is This Story Going To Continue?
person Arieru
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i loved it :D
are you gonna right another chapter for this?
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Overusage of exclamation marks. It was very jarring to me, it made me realize that I was just reading a story instead of sucking me into it. I'm pretty sure it's not grammatically correct to use more than one punctuation mark like that (I.E excessive question marks and exclamation points at the end of a sentence). And Draco acted like a child in the end - he's an adult man right? Well he seemed more like a teenaged girl. Sorry, but that's just how it read to me.

schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i thought it to be greeat!
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very cute i love draco in this his bit definately had me giggling a really good story i hope there will be more soon
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo can't wait for chapter 2! Draco is pregnant w/o the potion? Holy moly! If it's going to happen... it'll happen to those two! OMG!