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for Darkest Desires

by Lupinswolfie

person carha
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I laughed at the last part. Tonks was a bit of a bitch, but at least she got over it soon
person Cosmicfool
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I dont think I can adequately tell you how fantastic this story is. I stayed up late to finish t even though I knew I would be woken early. Truly fantastic and I cant think of anything that I would change.

Well done
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I loved it. I was just getting ready to post about finding a story where Remus is a bit more aggressive and wolf like then most of the stories I've been reading, and then there it was, right here the whole time!
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
brilliant story darlin i love remus and hermione and this story was perfection x
person Pastel
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I loved it.
person Allison
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is just incredible and I absolutely love this story. I couldn't put it down until I finished it. I love how you wrote it, the plot, the ending, the flow and everything else. Great great job.
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an incredible story. I am glad it had a happy ending for Remus and Hermione, as well as for Tonks.
person belixz
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was brill absolutly one of the best hermy remus storys iv ever read.
i loved the different sides to mooney and the whole idear of soulmates dead romantic.
anyway a big thumbs up from me and please keep em comming lots of love and kisses
belixz xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job! You really captured the inner turmoil and two personalities (or two sides of his personality?) pushing for dominance.

schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I wont say I was disappointed that I got to read the completed tale, but I am sorry you had to be forced into posting all at once when you wanted to gradually update your tale. I too have had bits and bobs nipped from stories...both fan fics and original works. Its not a pleasant experience and while yes, it is possible for two people to have similar ideas, it is rarely an identical thought. ANyhow, great work. RL/HG is fast becoming one of my favorite ships to read and write. You have read and reviewed me in the past, and I will always return the favor :) About the story.....I loved the portrayal of Moony and Remus as seperat beings. Not just the demon lurking within but another, complete personality and I love that by the end you see them slowly morphing into one person that accepted the other, and a cocky, cute and confident Remus is hella sexy!!! Good job, love. I look forward to reading more.....perhaps your Lucius and Mione? I always watch for updates on that one.......


Happy Writing,
SG